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    Feedback Welcomed - Sequential Work for my Website!

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    • Michael Angelo Go
      Michael Angelo Go @NessIllustration last edited by

      Hey @NessIllustration I just recovered just from burnout. Here's what I ended up making.

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      Now that I reflect on my decision making. Another reason that the original image was so extreme was because this piece is also meant to show I can convey emotion in a non-stiff way. She's kind of stiff now, but now she doesn't look traumatized.

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      • Michael Angelo Go
        Michael Angelo Go last edited by

        I'm trying something new! This is for my next set of sequential work with the plushie character of my cousin.

        I have a Bachelor's Degree in architecture and I use Rhino. Rhino is a 3D software very similar to Google SketchUp except a lot more complex and less user-friendly. For this scene, I am rendering a life-sized hot wheels race track, where my cousin is on a toy go-cart similar to the ones from the Mario kart games competing with other players.

        My idea for him is that he's going to be riding several different vehicles (race car, helicopter, and submarine). The idea here is that he's playing with toysized version of these things, and imagining himself actually in them.

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        • Michael Angelo Go
          Michael Angelo Go @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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          • Michael Angelo Go
            Michael Angelo Go @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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            • Michael Angelo Go
              Michael Angelo Go @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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              • Michael Angelo Go
                Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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                This felt like forever, but I'm glad I'm done drawing it.

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

                  @Michael-Angelo-Go this is beautiful. On a related news, my province recently held a pageant where contestants did not wear a lick of makeup. I love how the beauty standards in the Philippines are changing.

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                  • Michael Angelo Go
                    Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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                    Happy late Valentines day!

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                    • jakecrowe
                      jakecrowe @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

                      @Michael-Angelo-Go This is adorable. May I suggest playing with textures? Everything here is roughly the same texture, there's little variation between the cotton candy and the balloon for example. Pushing the rubbery-ness of the balloon and the cotton texture of the cotton candy will really elevate the image.

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                      • Michael Angelo Go
                        Michael Angelo Go @jakecrowe last edited by

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                        How's this?

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                        • Michael Angelo Go
                          Michael Angelo Go last edited by

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                          I also made another version.

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                          • Michael Angelo Go
                            Michael Angelo Go last edited by

                            I should have mentioned that these drawings are inspired by two children's books. 'Daddy's Roommate' and 'Heather has Two Mommies'.

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                            The one with the two moms is actually a redraw of a scene in the actual book, but the one with the two dads is an original scene I thought up using licensed(?) characters.

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