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    February Yeti cooking -update with 3d model

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    • Melissa_Bailey
      Melissa_Bailey @Kevin Longueil last edited by

      @Kevin-Longueil yep! As you'll probably guess, I really like what @chrisaakins suggests. In fact, I think if you get rid of the background altogether, the piece will read better as a spot. The focus will be directly on the characters and action, where it needs to be.

      However, I understand where you're coming from, wanting a portfolio piece too. But are you asking this one little spot illo to do too much? What if you modified the composition for a spot illustration, then even further expand your original idea into a full page or even spread illustration? There's no reason why you couldn't do two versions. That could be really interesting!

      👍

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      • Valerie Light
        Valerie Light @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

        @Melissa-Bailey-0 interesting insight about making both a spot and a full page/spread for this. I might consider that myself.
        @Kevin-Longueil I'm in a similar situation with my composition right now- getting wrapped up in all these lovely storytelling details, but losing the simplicity and impact. It's far easier, however, to tell you to simplify than it is to do it myself. I'm surprised to say it, but I really like @chrisaakins suggestion.

        www.valerielightillustration.com
        www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Valerie Light last edited by Kevin Longueil

          @Valerie-Light thank you for the feedback Valerie! Very helpful to hear that there is a consensus about getting rid of the background! I have to admit that I am feeling very deflated with this piece at the moment... when I take the background out I no longer like the piece though it is obviously the right thing to do... I am suspicious that it may be because the characters are not interesting enough or well done enough on their own to make a worthwhile image - thank you again for your feedback 🙂

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • Valerie Light
            Valerie Light @Kevin Longueil last edited by

            @Kevin-Longueil I am in the same boat!!

            www.valerielightillustration.com
            www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by Kevin Longueil

              @Kevin-Longueil
              Here is an update...we lost power in our neighborhood yesterday evening so i have been scrambling today to get the color going - only part of tomorrow left to get the background, bench, fluffy stuff on the yeti, and steam done! (and to maybe put a tiny cup in the rooster's raised foot) - this is about my fourth try at a full color piece and am super surprised that i am kind of liking it - @chrisaakins @Melissa-Bailey-0 @Valerie-Light @Kim-Rosenlof i really appreciate your feedback and hope you don't think i'm just ignoring your great advice by trying to still make the roof work for this....it may still end up gone but i really am trying to make a "cozy space" image out of this if i can - thank you again 🙂

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              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                @Kevin-Longueil It looks really good! I love the color you chose and the style. This is for you and your portfolio, so in the end, it is up to you. It looks great! And I do love the beams.

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                • Valerie Light
                  Valerie Light last edited by

                  I love where you're going with this. It looks great!

                  www.valerielightillustration.com
                  www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                    @Kim-Rosenlof @Valerie-Light Thank you Both!

                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by Kevin Longueil

                      Just posting my final in this thread - all of my color comps looked really bad but the orangey purpley one seemed best - so i went with orange purple green 🙂

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                      Fox's Birthday.jpg

                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        @Kevin-Longueil Thought i would share this in case anyone else thought it might help them too - this is a 3d model i'm working on to try to help me with character consistency for my next piece using the fox from this piece - I've never really done this before hence the holes in the ears i cannot get rid of - i was going to try to sculpt something by hand but thought i would try 3d on the ipad pro just to see... it is super fun if anyone is interested the program is called Nomad

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                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Wow so cool!

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                          • Kevin Longueil
                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos Thank you! i think i could be handy to have models of characters.

                            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                            • Valerie Light
                              Valerie Light last edited by

                              Oh cool! I think I could totally put this kind of thing to use. I feel like I default to the same 2 or 3 angles for faces not by choice, but just because that's how I picture them in my head. Thanks for the tip!

                              www.valerielightillustration.com
                              www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                              • Jeremiahbrown
                                Jeremiahbrown @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                @Kevin-Longueil I can't believe this didn't make it to the top 16 or honorable mentions! I suppose it's due to the too human thing that Will talked about at the beginning of the podcast. Incredible work though!

                                Jeremiah Brown
                                www.jeremiahbrownillustration.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/jeremiah.brownillustration/

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                                • Valerie Light
                                  Valerie Light last edited by

                                  @Jeremiahbrown @Kevin-Longueil totally agree.

                                  www.valerielightillustration.com
                                  www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                                  • LauraA
                                    LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                                    Oh, cool as cool can be! What program is that, and does it take a long time to learn?

                                    I third what Jeremiah and Valerie said. I was looking for this version last night!

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                    • Kevin Longueil
                                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos Thank you Asya 🙂
                                      @Valerie-Light Thank you Valerie! I think it will be helpful to vary the head positions for sure! - even if it had very little detail and maybe just had longitudinal and lateral lines to help with foreshortened symmetry
                                      @Jeremiahbrown Thank you Jeremiah! That is super nice of you to say! I've been doing these for years and have only felt pretty confident twice and of course did not make it both times 🙂
                                      @LauraA Thank you Laura! The program is called Nomad Sculpt and it is on the Apple app store.. i really do not know how to use it ... i just discovered something called "remesh" yesterday which really helped when the polygons get crazy...you can add, subtract and smooth the clay so it is pretty intuitive in that regard - also learned how to increase the resolution yesterday - working on trying to make a friendly yet potentially fierce dragon for my fox to ride.... it looks a lot like a cow at the moment 🙂
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                                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                      • Valerie Light
                                        Valerie Light @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                        @Kevin-Longueil Wow I super didn't feel like I have time to learn a new program right now, but i went ahead and downloaded it just to see if I could make it work. I made this model for a turtle head in about 10 minutes. I think I know how about 4 of the tools work, but honestly I can see how this is going to come in so handy already! (but I don't know how to undo the eyeballs being black.) IMG_0398.PNG

                                        www.valerielightillustration.com
                                        www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                                        • Kevin Longueil
                                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Valerie Light last edited by

                                          @Valerie-Light very nice!! It is both super easy and very confusing at the same time... did you color they eyes? If not it just means that it is not the selected thing you are working on.... you can add spheres and then mirror the location for eyes too

                                          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                          • Valerie Light
                                            Valerie Light last edited by

                                            @Kevin-Longueil oh I see I think I have them masked right now. Will soon figure out where the 'mask undo' button is.

                                            www.valerielightillustration.com
                                            www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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