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    March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!

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    • Georgios Christopoulos
      Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

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      • braden H
        braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

        @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

        @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

        My order would go B-C---A for myself. A just doesn't ring with me for some reason πŸ™‚

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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          Hey fellas!
          Working on inks,general layout and colour flats!

          Critique is always neat!

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          • Georgios Christopoulos
            Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

            More basic colours!

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            • jaepereira
              jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

              @Georgios-Christopoulos In the grand scheme of things i'm pretty sure it doesn't matter, but the boss there having a tie and button up seems very out of place.

              jaepereira.com
              instagram.com/jaepereiraart

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos @jaepereira last edited by

                @jaepereira you mean, bureaucracy doesn't affect fantasy adventures with demons and angels??? 😊😊😊

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                • jaepereira
                  jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  @Georgios-Christopoulos touchΓ©

                  jaepereira.com
                  instagram.com/jaepereiraart

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by Georgios Christopoulos

                      Almost there. I am sure I ll tweek some more with this character design sheet but let's leave it to rest now for a couple of days.
                      Made two versions,one with plain white and one with grainy paper texture.

                      What do you think guys?

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos I prefer the grainy paper texture! It lets the word balloons pop a bit compared to the plain white πŸ™‚

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                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                          Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett thanks man! that's what I was thinking. Though I have some thoughts that maybe it becomes "too much".

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