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    March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!

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    • braden H
      braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

      @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

      @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

      My order would go B-C---A for myself. A just doesn't ring with me for some reason πŸ™‚

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

        Hey fellas!
        Working on inks,general layout and colour flats!

        Critique is always neat!

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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          More basic colours!

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          • jaepereira
            jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

            @Georgios-Christopoulos In the grand scheme of things i'm pretty sure it doesn't matter, but the boss there having a tie and button up seems very out of place.

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            • Georgios Christopoulos
              Georgios Christopoulos @jaepereira last edited by

              @jaepereira you mean, bureaucracy doesn't affect fantasy adventures with demons and angels??? 😊😊😊

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              • jaepereira
                jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                @Georgios-Christopoulos touchΓ©

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by Georgios Christopoulos

                    Almost there. I am sure I ll tweek some more with this character design sheet but let's leave it to rest now for a couple of days.
                    Made two versions,one with plain white and one with grainy paper texture.

                    What do you think guys?

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      @Georgios-Christopoulos I prefer the grainy paper texture! It lets the word balloons pop a bit compared to the plain white πŸ™‚

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                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                        Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett thanks man! that's what I was thinking. Though I have some thoughts that maybe it becomes "too much".

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