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    June Contest - Albert the Fennec Complete (Critiques Welcome)

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    • ruth
      ruth last edited by

      Darker colour and shorter tie gets my vote. Maybe even shorter for the tie? I agree with @janette about the rebelliousness πŸ™‚ Looking really good!

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

        I vote for darker ears and shorter tie as well. Wonderful character.

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • Gary Wilkinson
          Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          @Rachel-Horne @brettb_draws @lizardillo @ruth @demotlj Great feedback on the tie and the black areas. I think a mixture of both wins the day.

          @Janette I say the same thing as an adult!

          Well i'm not going to have it done for the contest, but it's been great practice nonetheless and i'll try finish off the other poses to add to my portfolio.

          FENNEC RUNNING 2 sm.jpg

          www.garywilkinsonart.com
          www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
          www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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          • lizardillo
            lizardillo last edited by

            You've put so much work into him, he's going to be a wonderful portfolio piece. Please keep us updated if you carry on, I would love to see him all finished.

            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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            • Janette
              Janette @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

              @Gary-Wilkinson Oh that's a shame! Definitely one of my favourites!

              Art is hard.
              https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                Bryan-M @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                @Gary-Wilkinson Really great design! I like the stand out features and the colors you chose.
                I also didn't get to finish my design, but I plan on finishing it up to use as a portfolio piece.

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                • Gary Wilkinson
                  Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  Still working on finishing off Albert here and there....

                  clas sm.jpg Fennec 2.jpg

                  www.garywilkinsonart.com
                  www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                  www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    @Gary-Wilkinson he’s looking amazing 🀩

                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • mag
                      mag Pro SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                      @Gary-Wilkinson he’s such a cutie! And I love how you work with light and color! Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

                      Mag
                      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                      http://mag.takac.name

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                      • Gary Wilkinson
                        Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        Finally managed to finish Albert. He became a fox/ fennec hybrid in the end. Didn't manage to get it in for the contest, but it's been a fun side project and hopefully a good one for the portfolio

                        Albert the Fennecsm.jpg

                        www.garywilkinsonart.com
                        www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                        www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                        • brettb_draws
                          brettb_draws @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                          @Gary-Wilkinson This is amazing !! There's so much character in his expression and movements and the shape language is really nice. You've rendered it beautifully as well. I wish I was better with colour and light. If I was, this is definitely the sort of thing that I would have loved to work on. It's a shame you couldn't get it completed in time, this could've won for sure.

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                          • Oana
                            Oana @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            @Gary-Wilkinson Those ears! So expressive in shape! And the translucent pink at the base of the ear 😢

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                            • Janette
                              Janette last edited by

                              My absolute favourite!

                              Art is hard.
                              https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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                              • K.Flagg
                                K.Flagg last edited by

                                Really great design! I love what you did with painting his name, that is so clever!

                                K.Flagg

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                                • Gary Wilkinson
                                  Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                  @K-Flagg @brettb_draws @Oana @Janette

                                  Thank you for the kind comments. Hopefully I can build a house for him for this months contest. I'll try start a little earlier if I can

                                  www.garywilkinsonart.com
                                  www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                                  www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                                  • Alzamon
                                    Alzamon last edited by

                                    New to SVS here. Absolutely adorable and well put together character design. Besides, how not to love a character that is named just like me? 😁 Great work πŸ™‚

                                    Portfolio + blog + sketchy things @ https://alzamon.art
                                    IG: https://instagram.com/alzamonart/
                                    Twitter: https://twitter.com/alzamonart/

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                                    • lizardillo
                                      lizardillo last edited by

                                      He is wonderful, I’m so glad you finished him. Thanks for sharing.

                                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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