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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

      @kathrynadebayo thank you for the feed back! And the spotlight images are very helpful, it is a spotlight from directly above and there’s no wall behind it they are still on a narrow path so I was unsure how that light would affect a background that is very far off. I have played with it since and I thunk after seeing your spotlight pics I can tweak it a tiny bit more, and be ready! Fingers crossed!

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        Asyas_illos last edited by

        After a few small tweaks…sealed the deal, thanks everyone who helped me out!
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        • Kim Rosenlof
          Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @asyas_illos This is looking good and I really like how you have a unique take on the theme of tiger. The path and the edge of the light are almost touching and looks like a tangent right now. Also, the composition is almost cut in half. I recommend shifting the tiger and light area to the left a little so it is more asymmetrical. Great job!

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          • lizardillo
            lizardillo last edited by

            This is great. I like the fact you've not just gone with an actual tiger and gone a different route.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @lizardillo last edited by

              @lizardillo thank you!

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                I watched moana again recently with my daughters and really wanted to incorporate a giant being into the tiger prompt, so with that in mind went with a moana meets avatar kind of thing ,cuz I love avatar the last air bender and why not? The idea is that this girl is doing her thing and calling upon the great tiger spirit on top of this mountain or cliff. But the travesty here is that I know it’s lacking in story. Obviously it’s unfinished, so if anybody has any feedback or feelings on this piece in general please feel free to share with me!
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                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  I added some mountains to the background and some birds, to hopefully add some height?
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                  • Lisa Clark
                    Lisa Clark @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @asyas_illos This piece feels more like the tiger is made of water and the girl is standing right next to a body of water. Maybe it would look more like a cliff if the land can show through the wispy air more?

                    As for the story, maybe if you had a second character next to her that could tell more of a story. Someone wounded? Or someone ready to attack her?? Just throwing out some ideas!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @lisa-clark thank you I was worried about it looking like water… thank you!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @asyas_illos so here’s before and after adding more cliff below, I’m not sure if it looks more like water now?
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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                          I decided to keep the bottom how it was I thought looked too much like a reflection, but I did add some other spirits to insinuate she’s communing with the spirit world. Any last thoughts? I think I’m pretty much done.
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                            jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @asyas_illos Your characters are so appealing. I am late to the party but I am in agreement with the option that you ended up choosing for the Jade tiger. The Avatar tiger is a cool concept, and the motion and colors are lovely. The glow on the cliffs in the background adds even more drama.

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                              @jenn thank you I do love character design!

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                              • Lisa Clark
                                Lisa Clark @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @asyas_illos I really love that you added more spirits! That's really cool. I really love this newer style too. It's gorgeous!!

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @Lisa Clark last edited by

                                  @lisa-clark 😊 thank you, I didn’t draw for a looong time this past year, but I did do a lot research on where I wanted to go with my style I feel like I’m almost there…

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