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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Ok shadows or no shadows? Or just simpler shadows?…
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          Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by Miriam

          @asyas_illos I think #3 (the version with light shadows) looks best.

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            Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

            @miriam thank you I agree☺️

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Ok adding some last little details, should Riley be besmirched with flour or not she built the contraption but it’s doing all the cooking…🤔
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                AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @asyas_illos love it! So cute! I agree with the lighter shading.

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                • ruth
                  ruth @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @asyas_illos I like the lighter shadows and the flour! The machine looks like it's making a right mess, so I reckon there's probably flour everywhere. 🙂 Very cute!

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                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @ruth ok thanks for the feedback!
                    @AngelinaKizz thank you!

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                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Ok going for one more...
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                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @asyas_illos cuteee! You work fast 😉

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                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @angelinakizz only when I’m properly motivated lol

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                            jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @asyas_illos I love the curl of the smoke/steam and the girl's pose. I also like her gleeful expression. The tripod and cauldron look solid. I'm guessing she is some kind of witch or wannabe witch. Is she making a love potion? Maybe for the extra trash you can add baskets of herbs, additional cookbooks (potion books) and other random ingredients toppled on the floor.

                            So one detail: I am wondering why she is doing this in a closed garage. A mini stove like that would probably be running on a fuel of some kind so it should be outside or ventilated. Just in case kids get ideas, you know. 😃

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                              jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @asyas_illos this is a cute concept, and I love the lines of the pasta with the girl in front. I have a suggestion for the machine, maybe it should include one of those cranked pasta maker things that rolls the dough into a flat sheet and cuts it, since you are starting from flour. I'll find a picture...

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                                Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                                @jenn thanks for picture, I tried to imply there was more machinery in the back, I didn’t want to over complicate the image. Trying to get away with the bare minimum for a trashed garage, lol

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                                • Miriam
                                  Miriam @jenn last edited by Miriam

                                  @jenn said in Riley, Riley, Riley…:

                                  probably be running on a fuel of some kind so it should be outside or ventilated

                                  Don't worry, it's a magical flame! 😉

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                                  • Miriam
                                    Miriam last edited by

                                    The love potion witch drawing is really cute. 💕

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Ok think I'm almost done with details and cleanup. @jenn I had thought about leaving the garage door cracked but you’re right about the fuel source I was trying to bunson burner or camp stove but I think @Miriam has the right idea about it being a magical flame, I removed the canister and going more “calcifer” with it thank you both for the feedback!😊
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                                        jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @asyas_illos love it! and all the little animals and details 🙂

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                                          Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                                          @jenn thank you!

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                                            Holy moly! I didn’t realize it was only two days til March! I gotta get crackin!
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