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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

      @miriam thank you I agree☺️

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        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Ok adding some last little details, should Riley be besmirched with flour or not she built the contraption but it’s doing all the cooking…🤔
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          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @asyas_illos love it! So cute! I agree with the lighter shading.

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          • ruth
            ruth @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @asyas_illos I like the lighter shadows and the flour! The machine looks like it's making a right mess, so I reckon there's probably flour everywhere. 🙂 Very cute!

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              @ruth ok thanks for the feedback!
              @AngelinaKizz thank you!

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                Asyas_illos last edited by

                Ok going for one more...
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                • AngelinaKizz
                  AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @asyas_illos cuteee! You work fast 😉

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                    Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                    @angelinakizz only when I’m properly motivated lol

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                    • jenn
                      jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @asyas_illos I love the curl of the smoke/steam and the girl's pose. I also like her gleeful expression. The tripod and cauldron look solid. I'm guessing she is some kind of witch or wannabe witch. Is she making a love potion? Maybe for the extra trash you can add baskets of herbs, additional cookbooks (potion books) and other random ingredients toppled on the floor.

                      So one detail: I am wondering why she is doing this in a closed garage. A mini stove like that would probably be running on a fuel of some kind so it should be outside or ventilated. Just in case kids get ideas, you know. 😃

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                      • jenn
                        jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @asyas_illos this is a cute concept, and I love the lines of the pasta with the girl in front. I have a suggestion for the machine, maybe it should include one of those cranked pasta maker things that rolls the dough into a flat sheet and cuts it, since you are starting from flour. I'll find a picture...

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                          Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                          @jenn thanks for picture, I tried to imply there was more machinery in the back, I didn’t want to over complicate the image. Trying to get away with the bare minimum for a trashed garage, lol

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                          • Miriam
                            Miriam @jenn last edited by Miriam

                            @jenn said in Riley, Riley, Riley…:

                            probably be running on a fuel of some kind so it should be outside or ventilated

                            Don't worry, it's a magical flame! 😉

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                            • Miriam
                              Miriam last edited by

                              The love potion witch drawing is really cute. 💕

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Ok think I'm almost done with details and cleanup. @jenn I had thought about leaving the garage door cracked but you’re right about the fuel source I was trying to bunson burner or camp stove but I think @Miriam has the right idea about it being a magical flame, I removed the canister and going more “calcifer” with it thank you both for the feedback!😊
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                                  jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @asyas_illos love it! and all the little animals and details 🙂

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                                    Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                                    @jenn thank you!

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                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Holy moly! I didn’t realize it was only two days til March! I gotta get crackin!
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                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @asyas_illos you can do it! I know you can!

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                                        • Miriam
                                          Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @asyas_illos said in Riley, Riley, Riley…:

                                          only two days til March! I gotta get crackin!

                                          I know! I'm not sure if I'll finish mine, but I'll submit it just to share.
                                          (Not that I'd expect to make the top 16 anyway, since I'm a novice. 😃 )

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                                            Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

                                            @miriam you’ve got as good a chance as the rest of us, don’t sell yourself short! This is gonna be tricky one too since the prompt is so narrow, good luck!

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