Riley... a mess
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@jeremiahbrown yeah, that totally fixes it!
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@jeremiahbrown I actually feel it ages Riley, I preferred the first nose. I think unless there’s something technically wrong with it, you should stay true to your style. Your style makes you unique, and some will love and some will not, and that’s ok.
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@angelinakizz Aww, thanks! Good avice
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@Jeremiahbrown This is looking so good. I wonder if you should increase the contrast between the dog and the stuff around it. When I was looking at it today I immediately noticed the cat but it took me a minute to see the dog. I think the whole thing could benefit from a multiply layer of shadows to increase contrast and guide the eye.
I did a quick draw over to show what I mean.
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@chrisaakins That really does help guide the eye to the dog. @Jeremiahbrown This is great! However, I must admit that without reading the poster on the garage door I first thought it was a cat smacker, and that's why the dog was so happy...
Putting more shadow on the cat fixes that for me and I know the focus is on the dog, so the gadget is for the dog. -
@chrisaakins I think that looks much better! Thanks
@frogpunzel Hahaha! The cat smacker is a fun idea
I'll keep tinkering around with it
