Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    Riley

    Contest
    3
    4
    316
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • F
      Frogpunzel last edited by

      IMG_20220223_231707.jpg
      Here is what I've put together for Riley, I haven't decided on the cat's spot yet... There will also be powdered laundry soap trailing across the garage. I feel like some things are out of perspective, but I can't quite figure it out... Kind of running short on time, hoping I will make it 🤠 .

      AngelinaKizz jenn 2 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 1
      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz @Frogpunzel last edited by

        @frogpunzel i think it’s such a cute idea! I would definitely review your perspective though, the garage floor lines imply that the viewer is overhead, yet we’re looking from a lower perspective point at your main character, the pool and the fan. I think if you adjust the garage floor lines as well as the garage door and the washer dryer the perspective will improve.

        www.evarartistry.com
        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

        F 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
        • F
          Frogpunzel @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @angelinakizz Thank you! I think I can see it now. At least partly. I am new to drawing in perspective... so it going to take some trial and error. I took the first perspective class here on svs, but don't have a lot of practice 😁 The boy on the right is suppose to be at a counter higher up, and viewer suppose to be seeing it all from an even higher perspective... hmm. Maybe I will play with it in Photoshop and see if I can get these lines right 🤞Thanks again!

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • jenn
            jenn @Frogpunzel last edited by jenn

            @frogpunzel cute concept! maybe the cat can be peering into the tub, like curious but doesn't notice the large bubble coming toward it. Or chasing the large bubble that is carrying the other kid away.

            studiojcd.com
            she/her/hers
            Insta/Twitter: @chengdesautels

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • First post
              Last post