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    • Larue
      Larue last edited by

      So I think I have listened to all the comments and this is what the final color came up as. I haven't posted on critique arena yet so if you have some, not too involved, fix ideas to make it better please feel free to throw it outRILEY color 1200 X 1050.jpg there. I could put another 4 hours in but at some point I have to say stop! Thanks ahead of time. Can't wait to see them all up!

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      • jenn
        jenn @Larue last edited by

        @larue fantastic! I love the ingenuity of it, and it all looks believable. Definitely something to be proud of 🙂

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        • Griffin McPherson
          Griffin McPherson @Larue last edited by

          @larue this looks great! Love the little calendar detail. There’s one tiny thing that caught me eye. Riley’s belt seems to be blending in with the box on his left a bit. Just adding a bit more contrast to the box or the belt could fix that.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            I love it!

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            • Larue
              Larue @jenn last edited by

              @jenn Thanks so much!

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              • Larue
                Larue @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                @griffin Thanks Griffin, will do!

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                • Larue
                  Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @asyas_illos Thanks Asyas!

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                  • Miriam
                    Miriam @Larue last edited by

                    @larue Fantastic job!

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                    • ruth
                      ruth @Larue last edited by

                      @larue This is great! And I love how pleased Riley looks 🙂

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                      • Larue
                        Larue @Miriam last edited by

                        @miriam Thanks Miriam:) now to see what the pros think!

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                        • Larue
                          Larue @ruth last edited by

                          @ruth Thanks Ruth, glad that stands out:)

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