Developing great visual stories
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I have a duplicate canvas that I am trying other positions out for the girl but I still like this one the best so I moved onto color yes I went with my penny colors again… still working on additional foreground color scheme
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Doing some coloring today,
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So I revisited my second canvas to play with the first kid in the chain, I’d like some opinions on which version you like better
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@asyas_illos The second because I like being able to see her face.
Laurie DeMott
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@demotlj thank you for the feedback!
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I prefer the second too! I like seeing her face.
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@AngelinaKizz thank you! I be been working on it!
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Ok I’ve rearranged the face and also I think I’ve got second story. Yay! So the little birds have a purpose now being one of the girls ribbons had been whipped out by the wind the bird has caught it. Does that read well to you?
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Still playing with colors…
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The assignment didn't have to be in color, but since I will use it in Mays contest “storm” I went for it. I’m still open to feedback since it’s a ways away.
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@asyas_illos loving this. The bird’s ribbon seems to tangent with the roof, I noticed. The bit of curl in the middle is completely contained by the roof shape, if you see what I mean. My only other suggestion would be to possibly lighten the birds, or at least their faces, as they’re do dark.
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@crispalomino I did notice that tangent, yah it needs adjusting and I also agree about doing something to the birds I love the dark but maybe I can adjust it a little so their faces are clearer, thanks for the suggestions!
