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    Failed Treehouse Critique Please!

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    • Katherine
      Katherine @LauraA last edited by

      @LauraA Thank you Laura — actually I would be very content if it just read as "magical factory". What a cool concept 🙂 Thanks for all the feedback — I'm looking forward to getting a chance to apply it all!

      the site: katherinetyson.com
      instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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      • ArtMelC
        ArtMelC @Katherine last edited by

        @Katherine No worries, it looks fine on your website!

        www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
        www.artmelc.com
        I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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        • Katherine
          Katherine @Robert Henderson last edited by

          @Robert-Henderson Wow Robert, I don't mind at all — that was really very sweet and heartwarming to read. Thank you. I think that might be one of the nicest things anyone has every said to me 🙂

          the site: katherinetyson.com
          instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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          • Katherine
            Katherine last edited by

            Hi again everybody, I've begun reconstructing my Treehouse illustration! I'm starting with the composition and silhouette of the treehouse and this is where I'm at so far:

            Draft 1.jpg

            If anyone has feedback on the changes I've made to the composition and silhouette that would be absolutely fantastic!

            Rendering, values, and concept will be addressed at a later date! 😃

            the site: katherinetyson.com
            instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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            • PenAndrew
              PenAndrew @Katherine last edited by

              @Katherine How did you do in the competition- your image was fabulous.

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              • Katherine
                Katherine @PenAndrew last edited by

                @PenAndrew Oh thanks Stephen ( I have learnt your name is not Andrew since our last exchange!). Alas I was eliminated in the first round but I lost to one of the winners so that eases the sting. hehe

                the site: katherinetyson.com
                instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                • PenAndrew
                  PenAndrew @Katherine last edited by

                  @Katherine You should be so happy your illustration is so beautiful and meaningful- I absolutely love it. Love your style. Glad you had some more recognition for your talent. I still don't know who won apart from Kim.

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                  • Katherine
                    Katherine @PenAndrew last edited by

                    @PenAndrew Gosh thank you so much Stephen! I was very surprised I was in the top 16, so that was nice. I am very happy with aspects of it. I'm going to spend a few more days on some of the things I didn't get around to and some of the things I'm not happy with before I upload it to my portfolio though. I have a bit of a backlog of older work I need to finish first though!

                    Yeah I lost to Kim 🙂 The other winner was Kate Presley — super strong piece. I'm really glad she won, much deserved.

                    the site: katherinetyson.com
                    instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                    • PenAndrew
                      PenAndrew @Katherine last edited by

                      @Katherine Oh great I predicted Kim and Kate as two of the top 4, glad to know my instincts were correct.

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                      • PenAndrew
                        PenAndrew @Katherine last edited by PenAndrew

                        @Katherine You should be very happy.

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