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    • Meekipink
      Meekipink @Kruzby last edited by Meekipink

      @Kruzby Both are excellent drawings and it was a tough choice! But I prefer the second one because, interior-wise, it feels cosier and more lived in. I think if you swapped the framed text in the bathroom for a tropical image, added a shower curtain, drapes for the windows, a bunch of pot plants, tiles on the wall and maybe even gave the octopus a face mask and towel on his head, and..... a little rubber ducky, it would have been a winner, haha ^_^

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      • Kruzby
        Kruzby @Meekipink last edited by

        @Meekipink Thank you so much for that feedback. Those are some super duper great ideas! I love the idea of potted plants, changing the picture, and adding the beloved rubber ducky. You just reignited the fire for this image. Thanks so much!

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        • Kruzby
          Kruzby @mcschweitzer last edited by

          @mcschweitzer Thank you for that comment! I agree with you, I like the octopus one better because of the character use; it just gives the image purpose. The living room one would definitely benefit from having a character, but I am not sure what to include to liven it up and bring it into reality. I am not confident in my ability to create a human that would match the style of the room/drawing, especially in this perspective.

          Any thoughts?

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          • Meekipink
            Meekipink @Kruzby last edited by

            @Kruzby If you finished the 2nd image with some ambient lighting radiating from the fireplace, you could get away with just having a figure reading on the couch (or maybe even a snoozing cat?).

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Welcome! It seems you’ve got a good grasp on perspective and interesting povs, both of these are phenomenal. I’d say the bathroom is my favorite solely because their is a character with a story. Good job!

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              • Kruzby
                Kruzby @Meekipink last edited by

                @Meekipink Oooh yeah! I like that idea a lot. I'll play around with those ideas and post the results to this thread when it's finished.

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                • Kruzby
                  Kruzby @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos Thank you very much! I agreed with you, the bathroom is my favorite too 🙂

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                  • jenn
                    jenn last edited by

                    The first one is more alive with movement, emotion and fun details, and like many others said, the octopus character makes it more appealing than the second image. The second image is strong technically speaking, but is more of a quiet scene with no characters or story.

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                    • Kruzby
                      Kruzby @jenn last edited by

                      @jenn Good observations, much appreciated! If you could change something about the second sketch, what would it be? Thanks again 🙂

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                      • jenn
                        jenn @Kruzby last edited by

                        @Kruzby hmm something you could try in the second one might be to add a hint of a character. It's a very calm, stable looking room, so maybe there's like a tail sticking out somewhere or a glow of eyes? Just some ideas.

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