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    My road race wips ^_^

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      So I did an alternate sign as ‘start’ and I’ll play with the characters to see how they look coming or going… but I think I’m ready to add characters!
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        jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos I like the idea of having the start line in the distance. I'm thinking it would be good to mirror it so that the action goes left to right. I'm thinking the palette in the 'finish line' version looks like late afternoon or dawn. The palette in the 'start line' version is more like supernatural glow in the background, which is cool.

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          Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

          @jenn that’s so funny I just did that! AFAD17C5-1574-4568-9AEC-0273E06C5C25.jpeg

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            Here they are back to back, not sure which I like better…
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              Still working on the ‘finish’ version I thought these little ghostly buns were a good idea😁 also I opted for a foot race the bike made it a bit more hectic than I was looking for
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                jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos ooh I like the ghostly buns!

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                  A Former User @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos Lovely colors!

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                    Asyas_illos @Guest last edited by

                    @JQ thanks!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Working on my racers!
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                            Well folks, I think I’m wrapping this one up! If you see anything I may have missed I’m still open to feedback!
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                                Meekipink @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos Ohhhh, I love it!!! My only suggestion would be to adjust your lighting to emphasise the storytelling aspect - for example, reducing the brightness of the background. Right now I'm not exactly sure where to look, I'm drawn immediately to the blank spots on your path instead of your bunnies (the path has quite a high contrast compared to everything else). Maybe limit your brightest areas so it leads the eye where you want it to (e.g. the closest bunny and the finish line).

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                                  Asyas_illos @Meekipink last edited by

                                  @Meekipink thanks for the feedback😊 I think I like the the high contrast though, in my eyes it allows you follow along the path to each racer. But I appreciate your point of view!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                    Ok so this is totally wild, I know, but I really wanted to do something that was completely nonsensical and whimsical wrapped up into one. Something that makes you do a double take, so I thought of this sort of dreamscape last night while trying to fall asleep, and viola! Is it too crazy? I’m also adding stars and other details to enhance the environment, which is of course what I’ve been focusing on. Let me know your thoughts!

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                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos oooh it's super cute, definitely whimsical, but I'm not getting rabbit road race.. it would be prefect in a dreamy scenario though!

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                                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                          @AngelinaKizz it’s basically a dream here’s the rest of the concept
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                                            Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos Both pieces are gorgeous! I love the creativity in the second one and I admire your skills with environment/Background, such wonderful solutions.

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