Personal projects feedback please:|

[Melissa_Bailey]

@Asyas_illos you're so welcome! I think it could be really nice without a background, or maybe an out-of-focus, painterly background. That will keep the focus on the contrasting characters.

[Jeremy Ross]

Hi @Asyas_illos, I like C the best. Looking good!

[Asyas_illos]

@Jeremy-Ross awesome thanks Jeremy!

[Asyas_illos]

Still chipping at this one

[Asyas_illos]

Think I’m done with this one

[MelissaJacie]

@Asyas_illos I like this background tree branch! Nice work there! Inspiring.

[Asyas_illos]

@MelissaJacie thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

Starting a spread for Hansel and Gretel

[Asyas_illos]

[Asyas_illos]

Just got some heads to do lol

[Asyas_illos]

Wrapped this up today!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Asyas_illos This is looking great!

[Asyas_illos]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks

[Asyas_illos]

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[Asyas_illos]

[Asyas_illos]

So i did away with the carousel and went with this instead. I need to do more spot illustrations I realized, for my portfolio… so here we are… again… lol

[Asyas_illos]

[Asyas_illos]

Ok finished with this one do You think it’s portfolio material?

[Asyas_illos]

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[Asyas_illos]

I was doing this piece for my portfolio but I read up on the upcoming critique arenas and thought I could amend my original concept a tiny bit to fit the prompt cloud. Does anything stand out as far as composition or story, etc.? I plan to add rain in the last steps.