23 Sept 2022, 21:49
@Kim-Rosenlof thanks for the feedback I will play around with those ideas
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My little Cloud wips :)
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Made lots of progress since yesterday. I’m wondering if the the red line adds anything to the story or if it’s unnecessary. Also wondering if I should reduce opacity of the fog a little? Thoughts?
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@Stephanie-H yes it’s to keep them from getting seperated but the dog broke free. And yes fog is usually see through but I wanted to appear very thick that’s why they are having trouble finding the dog. But I’ll play around with it a little
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Does this opacity work?
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@Asyas_illos This is looking good
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@Frogpunzel I’ve fixed it since but thanks!
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@Asyas_illos I really like the idea and your style is so great! The characters are really good. I feel like the man with the child on his shoulders is on the same plane as the dog so they should be able to see it. The dog doesn't seem to be hidden. I did a quick draw-over to show one way to fix that (excuse all the weird stuff
). I felt like all the characters were the same size so I brought two of them forward so they are not in the same fog "aisle" as the dog and they add a variety of sizes to your illustration.
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@Kim-Rosenlof thanks for the feedback I will play around with those ideas
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I don’t have the energy to do anymore to this, I did add another bloop of fog in between the dad figure and the dog hopefully that seems a bit more realistic
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@Asyas_illos I'm always amazed by how much you do accomplish each month!!! Hope everything is ok. This image was a fun idea, and turned out well!
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One last idea here. Is the story clear there’s not much really to it lol.
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So many beautiful ideas! I didn’t get to comment on the first two (bit of a rough month here too… ) but I love them. I read the third like this: a magical character flying on an owl, creating the clouds? Love the bird and the general feel of the piece
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@Oana thank you and yep that’s pretty much it
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@Asyas_illos Love how whimsical this is. It's pulls me in to think about the story, or find the story. Then I find it, and it's so magical. Kind've makes me think of what I child's imagination would come up with, which is fantastic.
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@Johanna-Kim awww thanks
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@Asyas_illos I think the rainbow could be more saturated, it feels a bit off at the moment because it doesn’t look as vibrant as a rainbow. I’m also looking at the stand that mr.McDoud has and I’m wondering why it’s there. I think it could help if there were something to indicate that clouds are coming from it. Just having it overflowing with clouds could do the trick
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Ugh yes I got rid of the original characters I couldn’t figure how I wanted to color them or leave them black it just wasn’t working I really this one though. Not cute but oh well.
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Ok calling it done:)
