Critique Time! Constructive Suggestion

[AngelinaKizz]

@Kori-Jensen not quite. It would be better suited that your buildings be vertical instead of horizontal.

[willicreate]

A draw over to go with my notes from yesterday.

[Kori Jensen]

@willicreate I think I have most of your edits rectified, what do you think?

[willicreate]

@Kori-Jensen Yeah, I think the image better informs the direction the character is falling towards. Looking forward to the finish piece.

[Kori Jensen]

I hope you like the line art so far. What do you guys think of the city scape? I am going to be adding the broken glass very soon, I just wanted you're guys input THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR HELP SO FAR!