Which one to choose?

[Chantal Goetheer]

Hi,
I've made a fourth version of my glowing anglerfish. But I also made a first ever watercolour and pencil illustration. Which one has a better glow story?
The spider is unaware that with the sunrise his web lit up. But I think I should add in a sunrise element.
Still tons of stuff to improve, colour control clearly being one of them. I'm learning about many things I yet have to learn . But this is a great way of learning.
Your feedback is very much appreciated! Many thanks!!

[AngelinaKizz]

@Chantal-Goetheer I think the better glow story is the fish and the hook. It’s unexpected, and we’ll done. The watercolor, I’m having trouble reading the story or the glow. It’s cute, but I don’t think it fits the prompt.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@AngelinaKizz thanks! i'll submit the fish then.

[AngelinaKizz]

@Chantal-Goetheer you could submit more than one!

[Chantal Goetheer]

@AngelinaKizz I'll try a second attempt tonight of the spider. Background darker and more transparent and try to get a sun rise in with better dew drops in the web