End of the line…wip ^_^
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@Asyas_illos I like this idea very much and how the transition is playing out!
I just noticed the white dog might be a bit off? It looks like he's watching something behind the kid, maybe if you move him front a bit?
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@mag thanks! And yes the dog was kind of a spur of the moment thing I’ll definitely play around with it’s positioning.
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@Asyas_illos can you lend me some of your speed?!?! Blows my mind how many you submit (and they're all amazing!). I'm sooooo sloooooow!
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@Asyas_illos Ah I love this idea Asya! And fab composition! Don't know whether you're thinking of adding it but I'm wondering if a bite mark on his arm might make it clearer that he's just been bitten? And the dog is adorable, know you've just added it but I reckon if you could make the dog look a little bit more surprised that could drum home the idea that this is a new occurance? Xx
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@helenbrady one reason I tend to work fast is that I have adhd and I will lose interest if I take too much time with it. It’s a blessing and a curse because I love illustrations with loads of detail like yours, I wish I had the patience to do it! It’s something I’ve been trying to achieve lately. And thank you!
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I’ve been kicking around some other ideas, making thumbnails, while playing with the color on this werewolf Kamari. I swear this prompt is the worst! Lol I don’t love any of my ideas this month, just not feeling inspired by it.
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So I cropped this added a few more details and I think I’ll do some lighting and shadows before calling it quits with this one, any last thoughts and critiques are still welcome.
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@Asyas_illos I love how his dog looks excited at this new occurrence! "Finally my human will understand me!"
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Do you guys think the crashed bike adds anything to the story or composition?
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@Asyas_illos I like the transition process on the boy, his expression, & the big moon in the back.
The werewolf could look more menacing. It looks skinny.
I agree that it's fun / amusing that the dog seems happy about the change.
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This is where I ended up with this one, think I’m going to call it.
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Working on some more Kamari sketches. I’ve been wanting to do one witth a cat because of the 9 lives thing, but went with a clearer new beginning (meaning life with a fisherman).
I struggle with interesting povs and perspective and almost always revert to straight on shots but for this one I couldn’t come up with an angle that showed everything I needed to tell this story.
Here’s a sketch and some beginning color.
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@Asyas_illos Gorgeous!
How about put the boat on a (more) lover level? It might spice up your composition
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@Asyas_illos really like this idea, and I think the side on composition works in this case. The theme reads really well.
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@mag thanks! I’ll see if I can work something like that out
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@MarcRobinson thank you
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Hi Asya, i think Mag has a good point about moving the boat a little more down right. For the side view, maybe few hints of perspective and some light/shadow shifts would put the scene more in an environment and make it feel more dynamic? Could a view from up also work for the story?
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@marek-halko thanks for the redraw it totally helps me visualize! I don’t know about a top view but moving the boat is more feasible.
