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    End of the line…wip ^_^

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      helenbrady @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos can you lend me some of your speed?!?! Blows my mind how many you submit (and they're all amazing!). I'm sooooo sloooooow! 🤦‍♀️🐌

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        helenbrady @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos Ah I love this idea Asya! And fab composition! Don't know whether you're thinking of adding it but I'm wondering if a bite mark on his arm might make it clearer that he's just been bitten? And the dog is adorable, know you've just added it but I reckon if you could make the dog look a little bit more surprised that could drum home the idea that this is a new occurance? Xx

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          helenbrady @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos 😂 these are great I love the girl at the back!

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            Asyas_illos @helenbrady last edited by

            @helenbrady one reason I tend to work fast is that I have adhd and I will lose interest if I take too much time with it. It’s a blessing and a curse because I love illustrations with loads of detail like yours, I wish I had the patience to do it! It’s something I’ve been trying to achieve lately. And thank you!

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              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              I’ve been kicking around some other ideas, making thumbnails, while playing with the color on this werewolf Kamari. I swear this prompt is the worst! Lol I don’t love any of my ideas this month, just not feeling inspired by it.
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                Asyas_illos last edited by

                So I cropped this added a few more details and I think I’ll do some lighting and shadows before calling it quits with this one, any last thoughts and critiques are still welcome.
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                  kirsten-mcg @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I love how his dog looks excited at this new occurrence! "Finally my human will understand me!" 😂 The werewolf in the back really helps get the story across.

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                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Do you guys think the crashed bike adds anything to the story or composition?
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                      Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by Miriam

                      @Asyas_illos I like the transition process on the boy, his expression, & the big moon in the back.

                      The werewolf could look more menacing. It looks skinny.

                      I agree that it's fun / amusing that the dog seems happy about the change.

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                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        This is where I ended up with this one, think I’m going to call it.
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                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                          Working on some more Kamari sketches. I’ve been wanting to do one witth a cat because of the 9 lives thing, but went with a clearer new beginning (meaning life with a fisherman).

                          I struggle with interesting povs and perspective and almost always revert to straight on shots but for this one I couldn’t come up with an angle that showed everything I needed to tell this story.

                          Here’s a sketch and some beginning color.
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                              mag Pro SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos Gorgeous!
                              How about put the boat on a (more) lover level? It might spice up your composition 🙂
                              But i love it already! Your shapes and colours are top notch!

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                                MarcRobinson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos really like this idea, and I think the side on composition works in this case. The theme reads really well.

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                                  Asyas_illos @mag last edited by

                                  @mag thanks! I’ll see if I can work something like that out

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                                    Asyas_illos @MarcRobinson last edited by Asyas_illos

                                    @MarcRobinson thank you 😊 I’m glad the story is clear.

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                                      marek.halko last edited by

                                      Hi Asya, i think Mag has a good point about moving the boat a little more down right. For the side view, maybe few hints of perspective and some light/shadow shifts would put the scene more in an environment and make it feel more dynamic? Could a view from up also work for the story?

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                                        Asyas_illos @marek.halko last edited by

                                        @marek-halko thanks for the redraw it totally helps me visualize! I don’t know about a top view but moving the boat is more feasible.

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                                          Asyas_illos @marek.halko last edited by

                                          @marek-halko also how does your pile of fish look so much better than mine?! lol!

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                                            marek.halko @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos well, i just love drawing fish😀.

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