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NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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  • MimiHecher
    MimiHecher last edited by 24 Feb 2023, 22:08

    Happy to offer you something to explain how to NOT do it. 😃

    Gratitude-pg-0607.jpg

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      Heather Foxwood last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 13:29

      ElephantandMousecompressed.jpg If you are still doing critiques I'd love input on what could be done to improve this!

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        Heather Foxwood @Guest last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 13:29

        @ashleegoovaerts I'd like to know too!

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        • von_Nimmermehr
          von_Nimmermehr @Heather Foxwood last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 17:22

          @ashleegoovaerts @Asyas_illos @Heather-Foxwood The How to Fix Ur Art is not under the curriculum just go on all courses and for me (i bet the order is different from computer to computer) its one of the first pictures shown. if not just type it in to the search field

          Bildschirm­foto 2023-03-02 um 18.15.51.png

          Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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          • Geoffrey Mégardon
            Geoffrey Mégardon last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 18:17

            This is one of my latest piece, I tried a lot of different compositions, and I would love your opinion / critique.
            Portfolio01-aJohn_space_tentacle2-95.jpg

            Not sure how many we can post, but I have a lot of recent work as I was working on my portfolio 😃

            Find me on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nodragem/
            Portfolio: https://www.nodragemillustration.com

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            • Kristen Lango
              Kristen Lango last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 20:45

              SpaceMeetsSea_v2_Websize.jpg
              If you guys need more art to critique! I'd love some feedback on this one.

              https://www.kristenlango.com/
              https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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              • NickyDrew
                NickyDrew last edited by 3 Mar 2023, 02:21

                Hi, I don't know if you're still looking for art to critique, but if you are, I'd love some help with this piece. It's a picture book cover mock-up from my portfolio. Other than my terrible attempts at painting dappled sunlight, I can't figure out why the illustration's not working. Any help would be super appreciated!
                cover mockup.jpg

                Portfolio: www.nickydrewillustration.com

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                • skeletortoise
                  skeletortoise last edited by 15 Apr 2023, 16:57

                  For assignment 2 in Will’s Developing Great Visual Stories class
                  5456574D-5D63-46D8-8C6E-69741A144001.png

                  LauraA Sarah VanDam 2 Replies Last reply 28 Apr 2023, 03:22 Reply Quote 3
                  • LauraA
                    LauraA SVS OG @skeletortoise last edited by 16 Apr 2023, 08:16

                    @skeletortoise I don't know about the foreground, but that little throwaway scene in the background makes me laugh out loud!

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                    • ksfabian
                      ksfabian last edited by 17 Apr 2023, 11:56

                      IMG_1423.jpeg

                      ksfabiancreations.com

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                      • skeletortoise
                        skeletortoise @LauraA last edited by 17 Apr 2023, 21:41

                        @LauraA thanks!

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                        • Katherine
                          Katherine last edited by 18 Apr 2023, 05:42

                          Dreamland—V1 Internet.jpeg

                          the site: katherinetyson.com
                          instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

                          Pamela Fraley 1 Reply Last reply 28 Apr 2023, 00:17 Reply Quote 3
                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                            Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 20 Apr 2023, 17:23

                            I d love to see how one of these could get better!

                            IMG_20220801_222132.jpg Screenshot_20230420_192006_com.instagram.android_edit_189065664201875.jpg Screenshot_20230420_202032_com.android.gallery3d_edit_189707329303340.jpg

                            Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                            Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                            • Miriam
                              Miriam last edited by Miriam 27 Apr 2023, 22:47 27 Apr 2023, 22:28

                              How To Post Images
                              (There was a question on the HTFYA YouTube chat today.)

                              1. Click on the blue "REPLY" button at the upper right of the page.
                                This will open a pop-up window. You can type text on the left half (the right half of the window shows how your post will appear, since you can add images & formatting).

                              2. Click on the "Upload Image" icon:
                                Image Upload Icon.png
                                (If you hover your mouse over the icons, you can see the name of the icon.)

                              3. A window will open to select a file. Navigate to the saved image, & double click or select it and click "Open".

                              Done! (You should see some text appear on the left side of the comment window, and the picture you selected should show up on the right side of the window.)

                              You can include text before &/or after the image. (To avoid short bits of text next to your image, make sure to start a new paragraph before inserting the image (by pressing "Enter" or "Return" on your keyboard, & doing the same again after your image.)

                              Click the blue "✓Submit" button to post.

                              (After you have posted your comment, you can edit it by clicking the vertical 3-dot menu icon "︙" at the bottom right of your post & selecting "✎Edit".)

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                              • Pamela Fraley
                                Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Katherine last edited by 28 Apr 2023, 00:17

                                @Katherine Is this a dream land? It sucked me in right away! I love your style and the color palette you used!

                                instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                                • Sarah VanDam
                                  Sarah VanDam @skeletortoise last edited by 28 Apr 2023, 03:22

                                  @skeletortoise I absolutely love the humor you’ve got going here! 😆

                                  https://sarahvandam.art/
                                  Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                                  • Miriam
                                    Miriam @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 5 May 2023, 04:13

                                    @Georgios-Christopoulos I like the Candle Gnome 🙂

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                                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                                      Georgios Christopoulos @Miriam last edited by 5 May 2023, 07:00

                                      @Miriam thanks!he was fun to come up with!

                                      Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                      Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                      • mcoxart
                                        mcoxart last edited by mcoxart 23 May 2023, 16:07 18 May 2023, 01:10

                                        I illustrated a (self-published) kid's book a couple of years ago, here's one illustration which I consider to be among the weakest.

                                        Background: The characters put on a "Wizard of Oz" school play. Off-stage, a character with magical powers creates a real-life tornado to make the play more exciting, which takes everyone by surprise. This illustration is meant to convey the fever-pitch of chaos that occurs in the auditorium, as the tornado snatches up objects from the audience -- grandma's dentures, the Principal's toupee, the Superintendent's pink purse, etc. I will say the illustration demanded a level of technical skill that was beyond me at the time, and I'd be grateful to anyone willing to "rip it apart" so I can do this better next time!

                                        the illustration that made it into the book (yikes):
                                        03TornadoRGB.png

                                        another composition attempt:
                                        rough tornado2.png

                                        https://www.instagram.com/mcoxart/
                                        https://www.youtube.com/@Spinnick

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                                        • Amy sa
                                          Amy sa last edited by 18 May 2023, 12:09

                                          Untitled-1.png

                                          (Middle class girl in fancy mall, She's at the eating portion with lots of decoration, She was surprised to see cristmas tree in summer so she decided to take a selfie)

                                          Made the character with colors, but for the background i wanted to do grayscale version first and then color. The background is not looking as I thought.
                                          I'm a very begginner to this, and it's my first illustration for childrens book but I do know how to use photoshop and have some drawung skills. it'ld be really helpful if you make an critic on this.
                                          ~Amy

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