Sample Cover for Portfolio Feedback?

[Laura Hunt]

Hi everyone! This is my first time posting a piece in this forum. I am working toward children's book illustrations and would love feedback on this sample cover. I am hoping to use it for my portfolio. Thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

@Laura-Hunt this is very cute my only critique is that you could scooch the “and the” over to give the girl a little more room.

[kirsten-mcg]

@Laura-Hunt This is so cute! I honestly can't think of any critiques. I really like the pea with the sleep mask!

[Lee White]

@Laura-Hunt overall a nice piece, but if I'm being honest, it's not very memorable. Not unique enough to make it into a portfolio. I would think about what the story means and push this cover a bit more.

[Laura Hunt]

@Lee-White thanks, I appreciate the honest feedback!

[Laura Hunt]

@kirsten-mcg thank you!

[Laura Hunt]

@Asyas_illos thank you!