Practice drawing characters
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Wow! Good stuff.
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love the angle for the hand. The dogs eye is a little under-done and I thing his paw on the boy would be more dramatic for a dog...great expressions throughout.
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@natiwata Really nice image!! I think you should paint this one! If you do however, I would put the dog a little higher so his neck isn't cut where it is... That's the only issue I see with composition! Great characters
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Really terrific sketches!
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I love the expression of the boy in the lower corner! Ohhh!
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@natiwata This is progressing very well! I like the angle and your choice of having no kids behind the hand/gem. Between that and all the eyes leading it draws the readers attention right to the focus.
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@Charlie-Eve-Ryan @Jason-Kellogg @Rob-Smith @Camila-Barrera-Daza @BradAYou Thank you for the comments!
@NoWayMe - Thanks for the feedback, good catch with moving the dog up a bit.
@Russ-Van-Dine - I agree the dog's eye could be more pronounced, I'll add that when I paint it. I had tried his paw on the boy and didn't get it quite right, but perhaps I'll try it again, thanks for the suggestion!
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Update!
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Super nice work!
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@evilrobot thank you! You think this works better as a vignette?
Nat Iwata
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l love it.
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Thats very cool!
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Wow! love it! (I prefer the NOT vignetted version)
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Wow, just great! Thanks for sharing
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@natiwata Super nice as usual Nat! - really nice composition - i like the non-vingette also - i just wanted to see what it would look like if i saturated parts of the gold and the boy to make him pop more - i think i went a bit too far but i thought maybe the boy should pop a tiny bit more than he does? maybe not - possibly just a few more hard edged lines on him? - something though i think - here is the one i did the quick cut/paste/adjust on -
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@natiwata What if you did it like they are coming out of the vignette instead of just erasing borders?
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Thanks @Kevin-Longueil , I will try and warm things up a bit to make that gold stand out more!
@Jin-Kus I like that idea for the vignette, thanks
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Lunch break update!
Nat Iwata
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This is awesome it really makes me want to see the rest of the story. And I like the full image rather than vignette.
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@natiwata love this piece and all of the great facial expressions you have going on. My only comment would be that the boy in the yellow shirt - his one eye is not really positioned right and it appears to be looking further above the golden nugget that his other eye. I am referring to what would be his left eye. I think if you moved the pupil/iris down inside the eye shape it would line up with the direction his other eye is looking and towards the nugget.
