Flying Pigs WIP, Feedback appreciated!

[Lee Holland]

Looks great to me, Really fun.

[Maile McCarthy]

@Lee-Holland Thanks

[Leontine]

Well done, its so much fun to watch!

[Fabienne]

Superb! There is so much to explore!
Only one point: Which house is in the front? Shouldn't be the kids-house darker, because it's closer to the viewer?

[Maile McCarthy]

@Fabienne Yes, I see that now. The front one definitely needs to be darker. I'll go update it. Thank you!

[Dan Tavis]

Awesome work at creating action in this piece Maile! The incline of the houses really adds a great line of motion.

[Jiří Kůs]

Great , I was immediately looking at the character

[Maile McCarthy]

@Jiří-Kůs @Dan-Tavis Thanks so much!

[Shannon Perkins]

I like the update, much easier to see the character, and the atmospheric perspective you used on the farthest house really adds a sense of depth. Also, having the text in there fills in that empty space I mentioned earlier. Picture books need that open space for text, earlier I was looking at it from a stand-alone piece. Good work!

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

This is really nice, I like it very much