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      Tyler Blake last edited by

      I think the balloon needs to be bigger- not in a "try for scientific accuracy" way, just to sell the idea that it can lift the ship (which appears to be metal). They're pretty close to the same size, if the balloon was about twice the size of the ship it would break the overall design into thirds... the perspective looks great, the layout for the backgrounds totally works with objects poking out of the clouds, it looks like lots of fun πŸ™‚

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      • Lee Holland
        Lee Holland @Russ Van Dine last edited by

        @Russ-Van-Dine Thanks Russ

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        • Lee Holland
          Lee Holland @mattramsey last edited by

          @mattramsey @leontine @tyler-blake @russ-van-dine Thank you for the comments. I will definitely have a look at making the size of the balloon bigger. I'll post an update in the next day or two.

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          • Dulcie
            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

            Love it, the composition is really dynamic and it's definitely going to be an exciting piece! I also love that you have Ironbridge as a focal point in the background πŸ™‚

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            • Lee Holland
              Lee Holland @Dulcie last edited by

              @Dulcie Thank you Dulcie.

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              • evilrobot
                evilrobot SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

                This is going to be such a nice image when it's finished. So much fun stuff to look at. Looking forward to seeing the finish on this:)

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                  ShereeNorthrup last edited by

                  This is going to be such a fun image piece. I love how you are using perspective.

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                  • Doha
                    Doha last edited by

                    Wow, it looks great already. I can't wait to see the final result!
                    I am loving the details and the characters.
                    Best of luck!

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                    • Leontine
                      Leontine last edited by

                      Hey Lee, please no offence. I see a 'small' thing, The balloon on the left looks a bit like a but. LOL Maybe not a problem if you use the right colors...XD

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                      • Lee Holland
                        Lee Holland @Leontine last edited by

                        @Leontine LOL My partner said that it looked like a butt also. So I thought maybe I should change that.thank you.

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                        • Lee Holland
                          Lee Holland last edited by

                          Hi Everyone. Here is the rough drawing finished. I still need to clean it up but thought before I do I would show you all the changes I have made before i go into Painting it. 0_1475780929389_Ironbridge move tree 2.jpg

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                          • mcucchi
                            mcucchi last edited by

                            I love this. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Great image, itΒ΄s going to be awesome! This is my favorite type of image - in the air, with many planes and depth and a lot going on. Really looking forward to seeing your progress on this one!

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                              • Rich Green
                                Rich Green SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

                                @Lee-Holland - this looks amazing - can not wait to see it painted!!!

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                                • Lee Holland
                                  Lee Holland last edited by

                                  @mcucchi @smceccarelli @rich-green Thank you for your comments. I will keep posting my progress on this. hope i paint it good enough. I'm still unsure sometimes what colours to choose.

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                                  • lmrush
                                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                    Fantastic!

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                                    • Lee Holland
                                      Lee Holland last edited by

                                      Hi everyone. I think i have finally finished this image. It took me a while but its done. If anyone has any thought on any improvements that would be great.
                                      0_1476978422625_ironbridge.jpg

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                                      • Lee Holland
                                        Lee Holland last edited by

                                        I was trying to get a rusty look on this area so I put a textured layer on top with the blend mode set to (soft light.)
                                        0_1476978753953_Iron and rust.jpg

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                                        • smceccarelli
                                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          It looks wonderful!! Really super nice, everything about it is perfect!

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                                          • evilrobot
                                            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                            Amazing work. Great color. Especially the steam and the clouds. You got a great piece here.

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