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    • aska
      aska @evilrobot last edited by

      @evilrobot It looks great and it will take me years to draw like that. Wow...:-) However it seems to me, that the gum ball could be smaller. Unless its a really enormous object.

      Aska
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      • evilrobot
        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

        And one more work in progress for the night don't know if I'll keep the warm color for the shadows or go cooler. 0_1494497479729_50-things-WIP-color.jpg

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        • Charlie Eve Ryan
          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Love it!

          Happy Creating
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          • Tyson Ranes
            Tyson Ranes @evilrobot last edited by

            @evilrobot awesome work

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            • Jon Anderson
              Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

              This is looking great! It may just be me, but the tile lines on the floor seem a bit off. They work well with the boy but feel off when looking at the popcorn stand and the shelves behind the boy. I like the direction and look forward to seeing more!

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              • evilrobot
                evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                Think I'm calling it finished now 0_1495093687943_50-things-finished.jpg

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                • NoWayMe
                  NoWayMe @evilrobot last edited by

                  @evilrobot Very good work!!! I think you nailed it! The only thing that is bugging me is what @Sarah-LuAnn pointed out... I think you are loosing a lot of storytelling by just having the guy standing there. Maybe he could be looking at his watch, exasperated that the boy is taking so long to decide what he wants ? Otherwise, great work!

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                  • aska
                    aska last edited by

                    Sweet:-) I feel like eating some candy now 😉

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                    • Jeanne.M.Bowman
                      Jeanne.M.Bowman last edited by

                      All I have to say is that this is A M A Z I N G. Such great work!

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                      • Jake Parker
                        Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                        Solid work! @Will-Terry should be proud.

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                          @evilrobot Really nice work William!!

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                          • Randy Smith
                            Randy Smith last edited by

                            Really nice work. I love how you placed the main character in a pool of light. Good job!

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                            • Eric Castleman
                              Eric Castleman @evilrobot last edited by

                              @evilrobot this is really good!!! High level skill 😉

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                              • Lee White
                                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                great looking scene here. Good looking line work and detail. One thing though, your 3rd vanishing point lines are all over the place. Make sure that 3rd point is far away and make sure everything goes to that point. Right now everything is drawn so well that the angles on that are really throwing it off.

                                Can't wait to see this finished! 0_1495214404019_1488663012060-50-things_-wip-3.jpg

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