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    • evilrobot
      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

      This is very awesome thanks @will-terry-art here's my submission. I'm Ok with you using my name and website www.palacioillustration.com either way is fine with me thanks. I wanted it to feel like a horror movie opening scene. The viewer picks up that the guy in the boat is in danger even though he doesn't know it yet. 0_1488993479881_palacio_black_white.jpg

      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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      • mattramsey
        mattramsey @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

        @Sarah-LuAnn Well Sarah, you asked for a crit so here is mine: This. Is. Awesome.

        Seriously really great! I'm sure Will can give pointers and find areas of improvement but I just really, really like this!

        https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
        https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
        https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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        • mattramsey
          mattramsey last edited by mattramsey

          Hi @Will-Terry
          First: thanks for this opportunity!

          Second: I'd love a (harsh as possible) crit on this. I feel very happy with certain elements but overall I don't feel it is a very successful piece.
          You can use my name and if you are plugging people my twitter is @mramseyART

          0_1488994244651_SVScrit.jpg

          Concept: Modern Western version of David (from the Bible) as a boy taking care of his father's sheep. Other pages had him teaching them and washing them, etc.

          https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
          https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
          https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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          • Tyson Ranes
            Tyson Ranes @Sarah LuAnn last edited by Tyson Ranes

            @Sarah-LuAnn this is great, I love the composition and color. Is this from a scanned image? What did you use to create this?

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            • Joy Heyer
              Joy Heyer last edited by Joy Heyer

              Here is a spot illustration I would love to have considered. This is a very generous offer and a fun idea! I can't wait to see your critiques. I always learn from them. You can use my name and my website is joyillustrated.com. 0_1489010016946_HeyerJoy 3pigs3.jpg This is an illustration for the story of the 3 Little Pigs. This is the moment after the wolf blows down the stick house. It is part of a series of illustrations for my portfolio (the other 2 are already online). I'm attempting to show consistency in style and character.

              Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
              Instagram: joy_illustrated
              Website: joyheyer.com

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              • Sarah LuAnn
                Sarah LuAnn SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                @Tyson @Joy-Heyer @mattramsey Thanks so much for your kind comments! To answer Tyson and Joy's questions, I did the sketching and drawing traditionally, scanned it, and then created the image in Adobe Illustrator. Its entirely made with vectors (as are all the images in my portfolio) which is really nice from an enlargability standpoint. No pixelation ever! 🙂 I really enjoy my process but it is a bit weird and not for everyone.

                sarahluann.com

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                  0_1489022283649_17192456_10211348284236356_9132522171645252504_o.jpg

                  I'd like to stay anonymous for now because I'm not quite ready to do anything for others but I would love to see the critique of this one. I did this before watching the Draw 50 Things challenge so I didn't have a plan. I just did it from my head, as I went, like we weren't supposed too 🙂 I don't really have anything else finished. But a few personal projects in the works. Thanks for the opportunity! You can critique this as hard as you like 🙂

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • Tyson Ranes
                    Tyson Ranes @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

                    @Sarah-LuAnn You are rad, thank you. Great work!

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                    • Tyson Ranes
                      Tyson Ranes @will-terry-art last edited by Tyson Ranes

                      @will-terry-art Hi Will my name is Tyson Ranes you are welcome to use this image. Like I said in an earlier post I have nothing to link to, intact this is my only social media at the moment. EDITED INFO ON CONCEPT: >> "This is an angry Pig named Pickles. He has a wood working shop that he can never seem to keep clean he has allot of baggage. This is him standing in his shops back door tired off at everything. He has never known his true family, he lives in a small town where everyone knows him as a grump until one day when his Dad walks into his shop then everything changes long and short of it pickles gets a new lease on life and now the towns people are cheered by his stunning reformation. - I wanted to do something that popped color comp wise and I liked this sketch I did so I figured I give it a go!"
                      Thank you0_1489023509677_Pickles the Pig.jpg

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                      • Sarah LuAnn
                        Sarah LuAnn SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                        @Joy-Heyer Hi, I was just looking at your spot and I know you were asking for Will's critique, but I just wanted to say, I think this would look really fun if some of the flying objects were actually coming out of your illustration shape. Like the green plate at the top--if that were shown whole, along with some other objects breaking over the edge you've created for your vignette, I think it would be really cool. As I said, take it or leave it since I know it's not my critique you're after. I just thought I'd mention 😉

                        sarahluann.com

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                        • will-terry-art
                          will-terry-art @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                          Wow - thanks for the submissions - greatly appreciated - I'll probably critique this weekend. I edited my original post - something I forgot to ask - can you guys please edit your posts and tell me what your concept was? Thank you!

                          Will Terry

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG @will-terry-art last edited by MOO

                            @will-terry-art I don't mean to be stupid but...I don't really know how to answer that question. What was my concept? I might have alerady stated it on mine. Thanks.

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • Tyson Ranes
                              Tyson Ranes @MOO last edited by

                              @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I kinda wasn't sure either so I winged it. Woo-hoo!!!

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                              • Tyson Ranes
                                Tyson Ranes @will-terry-art last edited by

                                @will-terry-art Just edited. Thanks again Will! Now I have to go to bed I have a 1.5 year old and its 1:30 in the morning in East Texas.

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                                • audrey dowling
                                  audrey dowling last edited by

                                  what a wonderful idea! thank you @Will-Terry
                                  I'm finishing a piece now and will definitely post it here when I'm done 🙂

                                  website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                                  twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                                  facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                                  • markoman
                                    markoman last edited by

                                    Hey @will-terry-art , I tried with this illustration to do draw 50 things. It's a about little girl fear of her sick mother, and creating this world and characters around her to understand what is happening. Hope it's clear 🙂 My website is http://markomancic.weebly.com/ Thank you!

                                    0_1489055376129_1486934279828-auntsvs.jpg

                                    https://markomancic.weebly.com/
                                    https://www.facebook.com/marko.mancic.9
                                    https://www.instagram.com/markomancic11/

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                                    • mag
                                      mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                      Hi @will-terry-art and thanks so much for this possibility!
                                      This is an illustration I've done for a client (the book is already finished and soon will in print) still - I'm not 100% happy with how it looks. And I do not know why. It's a double spread for Alice in Wonderland picture book.
                                      My website: www.mag.takac.name
                                      Thank you!!
                                      0_1489058726160_Alice_preview.jpg

                                      Mag
                                      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                      http://mag.takac.name

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                                      • lmrush
                                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by lmrush

                                        What an awesome opportunity- I would love your opinion/a critique on this. Thanks Will- Concept Alice in wonderland

                                        0_1489067380401_Alicewatercolorsvswill.jpg ![0_1489067190852_Alicewatercolorsvs.jpg](Uploading 100%)

                                        Lisa Rush
                                        www.lisarushgallery.com
                                        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                                        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                                        • Joy Heyer
                                          Joy Heyer last edited by

                                          @Sarah-LuAnn Thanks! Honestly, I'll take any feedback! After you look at your own work long enough you either see only the bad or only the good so it helps to get another's insight. Having the objects break the border of the vignette is a great one!

                                          Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                                          Instagram: joy_illustrated
                                          Website: joyheyer.com

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                                          • lmrush
                                            lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                                            @Joy-Heyer I just love your style❤

                                            Lisa Rush
                                            www.lisarushgallery.com
                                            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                                            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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