Tree house WIP

Jose Ramos

@aska Hey, thanks for your great advices Aska, the blue version is the last one that I uploaded right?....Thanks a lot!

aska

@Jose-Ramos its the first coloured version from 2 days ago (bluish, greenish background)

Jose Ramos

@aska Ok, I´ve added texture, and I think I have 3 options, A,B,C... My favourite is B.

NoWayMe

@Jose-Ramos Wow! This is really progressing well! I vote for B

I would suggest adding a little more space between the top of the treehouse and the big branch of the tree in the foreground (maybe that branch could be slightly smaller ?). Right now it feels a little crowded.

I think the story is funny, but not perfectly clear in your image. Changing his expression helped a lot! I am thinking what if you would add a letter flying in the distance (a ransom letter) It would be like he read the letter, grabbed his bike and left fast to collect acorns and left the letter behind him. It's a little hard to explain! I will try to do a paint over tonight if it's not clear!

And maybe his worm friend could be sitting on his shoulder ? looking terrorized.

But I really love where you are taking this

Leontine

Lovely comp! Love the colors of all of them. I really like the last one. I have another suggestion, The Rooster with the arrow, I should point him towards the rabbit. Then It draws your eyes inwards, now its pointing towards the branch (out of the illustration) . I think you really don't want to put attention there. A worm friend makes the illustration more fun, Kids love litte jokes or 'easter eggs'. Good luck, your almost there!

Jose Ramos

Worm, letter and more space on yhe top

tombarrettillo

I don't think it needs any texture. Kind of muddies it up a bit, especially the characters

Chip Valecek

@Jose-Ramos Love the worm LOL his face is priceless.

Jose Ramos

I think you´re right about the texture Tomb, I´ve took it out.
Thanks Chip!

Jose Ramos

@Leontine Thanks Leontine!

Doha

I think it's perfect!

Jose Ramos

@Doha Thanks Doha! , and I really appreciate all the comments, they have been very hekpful.

evilrobot

Yeah, I think you pulled it off. Looks fantastic.

DOTTYP

This is a fantastic image, love it!

Jose Ramos

Thanks guys!

Leontine

@Jose-Ramos love the worm!