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    Glacier WIP - Please Critique!

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      A Former User @MOO last edited by

      @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thanks. You're perfectly right about the dock. I was trying to abstract many of the elements so I scrapped scientific perspective for the style

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        MOO SVS OG @Guest last edited by

        @ben-migliore Sounds good to me! It looks great and I'm all for scrapping perspective at times 🙂

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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          bennyschmidt12 last edited by

          this look great, if i would ad anything, i would put some of that texture you have in the back ground hills and stuff into the snow that cabins are on, and by the docks....just at thought, really cool piece!

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            A Former User last edited by A Former User

            @Pamela-Fraley @Kevin-Longueil @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen @bennyschmidt12
            Thank you for your feedback!! I made a lot of changes since your critiques. Here's what it looks like...

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              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Guest last edited by

              @ben-migliore Very Nice!

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                @ben-migliore Love it!! And that smoke is sweet too. 👌🏼👌🏼

                instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                  bennyschmidt12 last edited by

                  oh yeah!, love it!

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                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    This is looking fantastic. Nice work.

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                    • Christine Garner
                      Christine Garner last edited by

                      Very nice work!

                      website: https://thimblefolio.com

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                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                        @ben-migliore Looks great!

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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