Clever girls
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@smceccarelli Amazing work. Beautiful colour palette. I love the girl with black curly hair!
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That's so cool!!! Are they based on real scientists?
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@ben-migliore Not really, though I was thinking about Marie Curie by the first one (maybe that´s why I made her blond!).
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@smceccarelli Still really cool
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Love! I see no problems.
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@smceccarelli The texture is great! This makes me want to start using oil or chalk pastel! Really nice work.
My only real critique would be piggy-backing off of some other comments. The hand holding the test tube in the first one seems wrong. It should be holing from the top, not the bottom, as your wrist would turn "down" to pour, then back up to stop. In the current position, you'd have to really wrench your wrist awkwardly to stop pouring.
I agree with @Laurel-Aylesworth that the space shuttle in the middle one could be a bit bigger. And I also agree with @Kevin-Longueil that the hands of the last girl should either be holding the plugs themselves, or gripping the cord right behind the plug (hands butted right up against them).
I want prints of these for my daughter's room!
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Thank you all! I will make some of the changes suggested before posting on Wednesday!
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@smceccarelli Great work! I love these and your work is really getting better and better! I agree with many of the other comments in this thread about the hands. These little details are the difference for leveling up to pro and I know you got this. I'm sure you didn't need me to do a draw over but I did so others could see. I also agree with having the girl on the right holding onto the plugs.
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Thank you @Will-Terry, this is fabulous! You spared me a reference hunt
I am in a really weird phase where it seems I am learning something new with every piece - quite exciting. Maybe it’s the right time to re-watch all the course as well! -
@smceccarelli Well you're fast becoming a rock star - don't stop!
