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    Accountability check, NO critiques please....

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      I have been trying to finish this book for a couple of years. I don't want any critiques, I know it's not pefect and I have already had MANY critiques but I am just trying to get it done. FINISHED NOT PERFECT I am FAILING FORWARD :-). To keep accountable I am posting my days work so far. I am doing it completely traditionally using ink and brush for outlines and watercolor for finish. I will also be doing the lettering (that's the scarey part ..might take some help on placement for that area πŸ™‚ ) I want to be done by June as my husband is retiring and we have a whole new adventure ahead of us to prepare for! Thanks for your support. πŸ™‚

      https://www.google.com/search?q=finished+not+perfect+jake+parker&oq=finished+not+pefect+&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0.6661j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • djlambson
        djlambson @MOO last edited by

        @marsha-kay-ottum-owen So fun. Looking forward to seeing the progress and good luck with your goals πŸ™‚

        https://www.instagram.com/deborahlambson_art/
        https://deborahlambson.com/folio

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        • sheri_p79
          sheri_p79 last edited by

          This made me smile, its got such charm. Look forward to seeing the next piece :Β¬D

          http://sheripalmerillustration.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/sketchybears

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @djlambson last edited by MOO

            @djlambson Thank you!

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • StudioHannah
              StudioHannah last edited by

              It can be so hard to finish a big goal like that, but you can do it! Huzzah for illustration and for new adventures!

              www.studiohannah.com
              Social:
              www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
              www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
              www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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              • Eli
                Eli last edited by

                Ditto on the "made me smile!" Very cute and I love the expressions! Good for you setting a deadline and powering through. I like the accountability factor. I could definitely take a cue from you on that! Great job!

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                • aska
                  aska last edited by

                  i always thought that your story had potential! i can see kids laughing and pointing at playful chickens πŸ˜‰

                  Aska
                  www.mugaska.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                  https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @StudioHannah last edited by

                    @studiohannah Thank you!

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @Eli last edited by

                      @eli Thanks, Eli!

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

                        @aska Thank you πŸ™‚

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          Here's Day 2 of accountability.

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                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • smceccarelli
                            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            Hi Marsha! I think it's awesome that you are tackling this book again and aiming for finish. The text is a lot of fun and I like the character of uncle Carl. Way to go!

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                              @smceccarelli Thanks a lot.

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                Going to be gone all day but I woke up early and did a bit of prep for inking tomorrow so, just checking in. Now I need to go back to bed and try to sleep a couple hours so I can make it through the day and night!

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                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                  Today's work.

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                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • demotlj
                                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                    Wow, you are really zipping now! Great stuff and it’s fun watching the story develop.

                                    Laurie DeMott
                                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                                    • MOO
                                      MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                                      @demotlj πŸ™‚ Thanks. It feels good so far πŸ™‚

                                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                        Went to visit my sister this morning so only got one done today. I know it's not perfect but...it's whatI can do right now....pushing on!

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                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                                          @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might do this one over.

                                          I did do it over. Still not pefect but I'm okay with this one. Not okay with the last one...though the other photo is much better and clearer. I'm not a photographer πŸ™‚

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                                          I need to fix the tangent where the knee and leg meet too, I see that now. Photoshop.

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • MOO
                                            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                            Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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                                            I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

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                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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