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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

      Today's work.

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

        Wow, you are really zipping now! Great stuff and it’s fun watching the story develop.

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

          @demotlj πŸ™‚ Thanks. It feels good so far πŸ™‚

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG last edited by

            Went to visit my sister this morning so only got one done today. I know it's not perfect but...it's whatI can do right now....pushing on!

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            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

              @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might do this one over.

              I did do it over. Still not pefect but I'm okay with this one. Not okay with the last one...though the other photo is much better and clearer. I'm not a photographer πŸ™‚

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              I need to fix the tangent where the knee and leg meet too, I see that now. Photoshop.

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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                I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

                0_1516074398457_26841071_2051573288461483_7182649873718840008_o.jpg

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                  Here's my work for today. That's nine chickens!
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                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                    My work today. Not going to work out I don't think. This one will take m esome more time as I am trying to reposition it.........Oh well....pushing on.

                    0_1516242026580_IMG_20180117_181830.jpg

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • K
                      Kat SVS OG last edited by

                      It's looking like a cute story! Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all these chickens πŸ™‚

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

                        @kat Thanks πŸ™‚ Still plugging away πŸ™‚

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          Finished this today.

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                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                            I did make some progress today with sketching.

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                            The second image didn't post.....the sketches of Uncle Carl running. It's okay. I made a decision on that and will start inking soon.

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                              @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might redo this one......

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                Here are my two inkings for today. I'm starting to feel like these aren't that great again but I'm pushing ahead. Not sure if I should or not but....the cow is giving me some trouble again too....I hope I'm not giving in on this too soon. I believe someone else could do so much better but, it's my project so I am going to do it anyway. I am going to work on figure drawing and review the class on positioning characters again and also watch the visualizing perspective class. I'm a little embarrassed by these.....

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                                One of them is not posting. I'll try again later.

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                  This is the other one. Just being accountable.

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                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                    Guess what! I actually finished my cow. Not perfect, but it will do fo rme. Much better than it was. Sorry for the fuzzy picture.

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                                    And this is the last illustration of the book! Now, I need to do the cover and a few touch ups, etc.

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                                    Then I will prepare to paint a lot. Whew! Still a lot to do but I am going to say this part is done.

                                    Woohoo!

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • Eli
                                      Eli last edited by

                                      wow! Great job! That's huge, being done with the drawing stage. They look great--especially this last one. I LOVE that cow's expression!

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG @Eli last edited by

                                        @eli Thank you. It's been a challenge but I hope ot move forward and improve my skills with the next project and hopefully get to the end a little quicker πŸ™‚

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                          @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I need to redo this one because I messed up the ink and the white stuff I used to fix it runs with the paint 😞 Oh well. After that, the cover.)

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • MOO
                                            MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                            Hello all! Looks like I might be moving before we thought. I might have to wait to paint until then...we'll see. I'm a little scared to get started πŸ™‚ Oh well...onward!!!

                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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