Travel Wip - Critiques welcome
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I would love to see a handful of different thumbnails to choose from! And if you let us know what feeling you are going for (a "keyword") we can help vote on which thumbnail is best for what you are wanting. I love the fantasy concept!
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Here are my test comps... which one do you prefer?
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@jason-bowen While I think your compositions are lovely, I'm not sure I'm reading "travel" from them. That could be because you haven't gotten into the details yet, but if you could share with me what your vision is for the theme I'll be able to follow it better. The winged thing looks like it could be seriously cool...
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@rhirsch I have gone for a location which is hard to travel too but once there it is a safe place which holds answers to life's mysteries.
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Based on your vision for this piece, I like the thumbnail #6....though I think it needs some tweaking. I feel the character(s) in the foreground looking at the far-away safe place matches your intent the best.
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My idea has changed a lot haha... needs a lot more work but I am having more fun with this one
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If you look at your image everything important is happening on one side and it all appears to be in the mid ground. I would consider moving hatched egg to the left corner area a some how and making it larger move it to the right corner and make it larger then crop your image and reverse it so it reads left to right. Just a thought.
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@rcartwright Yeah your right, I should have mentioned I am adding dinosaurs into the landscape too.
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I'm going to say this done now. I need to learn more so going to watch some videos and re-calibrate myself lol.
