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    Feedback please for Kickstarter page (launching July 2)

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    • Rene Pfitzner
      Rene Pfitzner last edited by Rene Pfitzner

      Hi all!
      I've just finished polishing up the rewards graphics and checking the links for my launch in a week's time.
      It's a Kickstarter to get my webcomic printed as a graphic novel. It's called Sneaky Goblins.

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      If you can take a look and let me know if there's anything I've missed, that would be awesome! (the other day someone got back to me and said my pie-chart figures didn't add up- so thankful to that person!)

      *Edit: The Kickstarter is now live!
      Feedback still welcome though (you can edit the 'story' section after a campaign begins, but not the rewards or shipping)

      www.tolcraft.com/kickstarter

      Thanks guys!

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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        It looks really good to me. The only thing I'm not the biggest fan of is your gif of the projects you contributed to. I thought my phone was making the pictures glitch, but then I realized it was animated. I just don't think it really adds to the overall style of everything else.

        That being said, congratulations! It looks well put together and well thought out. It definitely seems like a legit project to back.

        Website: www.tessawrathall.com

        Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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        • lei
          lei last edited by

          Well, it must be a good kickstarter pitch, coz I can't see why NOT to get a copy... I really want to back it! Now, to remember what my kickstarter login is.... tell us when it's live, OK!

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          • JohnMK
            JohnMK last edited by

            looks good to me. Really love your work, Rene. Reminds me of the Phoenix comic

            https://www.facebook.com/john.kirkham.5439

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            • Larry Whitler
              Larry Whitler last edited by

              Oh my gosh! That looks so fun! You are going to bring joy to a lot of kids (and kids-at-heart) with your writing and illustrating talents. Very nicely done. Good luck.

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              • Rene Pfitzner
                Rene Pfitzner @TessaW last edited by

                @tessaw Thanks Tessa! Yeah I wondered about that. Sometimes no gifs is better than gifs.

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                • Rene Pfitzner
                  Rene Pfitzner @lei last edited by

                  @lei Thanks so much! Well that's always the aim when making a Kickstarter page-- try and remove all the reasons not to back! Those include- distrust, lack of urgency, not caring. If a page can address each of these, and if the book looks good, it should be golden!

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                  • Rene Pfitzner
                    Rene Pfitzner @JohnMK last edited by

                    @johnmk The Phoenix looks really cool! I'll have to get into it. Thanks for the comparison!

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                    • Rene Pfitzner
                      Rene Pfitzner @Larry Whitler last edited by

                      @larry-whitler Hey Larry thanks so much! The kickstarter is live now in fact! Cheers!

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