Music WIP: Comments Appreciated
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@burvantill Ahhh. I hate to say it, but I liked it better without the closest foreground elements. That is just my two cents. I feel like that is all my eye is drawn to. I do like the balloons though.
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@chrisaakins good to know, thanx! I appreciate the honesty.
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The foreground elements are a good idea in theory. I agree with @chrisaakins that in this particular way they don't seem to work, though. I may play with it a little before discarding the idea entirely.
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How bout this?
Lisa Burvant
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@burvantill I think its coming along great. I like it. The specs on the piece what do you plan to do with them? I was thinking colored confetti would be a nice touch.
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@burvantill I like it!
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Looks great, the only thing I would move is the balloon thats almost in the drummers face at the back. I would be tempted to move it above him or further forward just so he has a bit of room.
The energy is great in this, great work.
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@jason-bowen Thank you for the comment. If you are referring to the balloon that is in the drummer bear's face, that one is intentional. He is leaning his head back because its there. I will try to exaggerate that since its not translating. =)x
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@chip-valecek natural confetti, FLOWERS. LOL! like little cherry blossoms flitting about.
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@chrisaakins Thanx! I could not have done it without everyones help! =)x
Now for the watercolors!!!
