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    • Jabbernewt
      Jabbernewt @braden H last edited by

      @art-of-b well hey, man, it seems to me that these are more like final adjustments than anything else. You're so close to finishing, and we're all rooting for that eventual end! Just a little while longer!

      Pax

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        aaimiller last edited by

        Lol. I don't think it would bother me at all if I didn't have a 3 year old, who gets her head stuck in things all the time. I just worry about that poor boy with his head stuck in a trombone. That would make a great short story though.

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Wow fantastic work, and your rendering-so envious! Great piece!

          Lisa Rush
          www.lisarushgallery.com
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          • braden H
            braden H @aaimiller last edited by braden H

            @aaimiller

            I would make a pretty nice little story, yeah πŸ™‚

            Actually, that's a good project...

            Hmmm...

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              Work progresses!

              I used the colour from the picture frame for the dog, and though I still don't like it, I think it's better.

              I've learned SO MUCH about colour from this project. At the very least I know that if I had to do it again I'd do it much much better the second time around.

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              • bnewman
                bnewman last edited by

                Great work man. Mouse has headphones now!

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                • chrisaakins
                  chrisaakins last edited by

                  I think the dog works now.

                  Chris Akins
                  www.chrisakinsart.com
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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                    I love how you chose warm colors for the boy and cool tones for the background characters. I love it. It’s so dynamic. It’s so alive!

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      Didn't have time to change the strangle-o-phone to a trombone, but I'm happy enough to submit it πŸ™‚

                      Thank you everyone for your feedback and suggestions! I'm sure it wouldn't have turned out nearly as well without your help.

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                      • Jabbernewt
                        Jabbernewt @braden H last edited by

                        @art-of-b Well, as much as you didn't have the time to switch out the stranglophone, we didn't catch it when you posted it for linework critique. Listen man, this work is phenomenal. The colors alone are intensely appealing, and everything else is just top-notch stuff. I'm glad you recognize your mistakes, but you've done good work here, and it has been a privledge to see it all come together!

                        Pax

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @Jabbernewt last edited by

                          @jabbernewt

                          "We didn't catch it when you posted it for linework critique." Aha! It's YOUR fault! XD

                          Thanks for the kind words. This was a fun one to do and as much as it has its problems I've learned a LOT from doing it.

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                          • Jabbernewt
                            Jabbernewt @braden H last edited by

                            @art-of-b Hahaha, weeeeeell, yes and no πŸ˜‰

                            Oh I bet you learned a lot! I know in my personal experience I learned a lot as well!

                            Pax

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                            • BichonBistro
                              BichonBistro @braden H last edited by

                              @art-of-b it is so great seeing your process from thumbnails to finished piece!

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @BichonBistro last edited by

                                @bichonbistro

                                Thanks πŸ™‚

                                Seeing the process is helpful for me, too. I sometimes forget the steps I go through from start to finish XD

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