Music- WIP

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Hi, guys! Here’s my revision. It may not look that different but i added texture to the background and desaturated its color a bit to make the girl stand out more, I added more glow to her, more shadows, and tweaked the boy’s expression. Please let me know what you guys think. Thanks!

[lmrush]

It is lovely, your subtle outlining is so good!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@lmrush thank you so much! I’m very happy you like it.

[Naters.Art]

It looks great! everything is framed so nicely. The broken note concept is subtle and effective. the only critique I have is to watch out for the subtle perspective angles that are slightly off. Everything is so well laid out that my eyes were drawn to the page, chair leg, and cat shoulder that were just slightly askew. but great work, really.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@naters-calderone thanks! I’m glad you like. I’ll definitely work on those. Thanks again!

[holleywilliamson]

This is so adorable. I love the gestures and reactions and the colors and the stylization. Not sure how much time you have to spend on this but the central composition bugs me a little. You could crop it?

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@holleywilliamson hi, Holley! Thanks for the input! I’m not quite sure what you mean thoough.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Here’s another revised version. I hope you guys like it. The deadline is very near. I might submit it today.

[braden H]

@nyrrylcadiz

Very nice! Much improved. My eye is much more drawn to the girl's face.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@art-of-b Thanks! I’m very glad you like it!