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    My first digital illustration. Critiques invited!

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      JennyJones @TessaW last edited by

      @tessaw Thanks. I have about 5 spots done digitally and then this piece. I am working on a little joke book. So my other illustrations are little and not any real backgrounds except one that's in process. Backgrounds sure do up the difficulty factor! Everyone is so encouraging! I wish I could skip the day job today and do illustration! I have been following the forum for several months now and have seen yours and others stuff. I am equally impressed and happy that I can participate in a community of fellow artists. I look forward to participating more.

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      • Christine Garner
        Christine Garner last edited by

        Lovely picture, I like the mood and composition. Keep going with the digital painting it is a really awesome tool in your belt 🙂

        website: https://thimblefolio.com

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          JennyJones @Christine Garner last edited by

          @christine-garner Thank you.

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            robgale @JennyJones last edited by

            @jennyjones Perspective IS really painful! If you're doing it all digitally, one thing that can help is setting up a perspective grid to use as a guide. I like to do my sketching first to get the basic layout and composition, then lay down a grid and tweak things around a bit to fix the perspective.

            Rob Gale
            instagram: www.instagram.com/robgalestudio/
            website: www.robgaleillustration.com

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              JennyJones @robgale last edited by

              @robgale I use Procreate and I know there is an assist option. I just couldn't find it. I need to make use of the tools for sure. Next time...

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                JennyJones last edited by

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                Ok so I took all the advice and added a few things from my own critiques and reworked the illustration. I like it SO much better. Took a while. You will never know how many re-draws of the mom cat and middle cat were done! Whew!!

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                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                  So cute! It reminds me of a little golden book we had about The Three Little Kittens 🙂 I don't do digital yet so I can't say anymore 🙂

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    TessaW last edited by

                    Beautiful! I love it. 🙂 The littlest kitty's feet are a nice touch.

                    Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                    Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                      Eli @JennyJones last edited by

                      @jennyjones WOW this looks fantastic!!

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                        JennyJones @MOO last edited by

                        @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thank you. I loved that book when I was little. I will have to go back and look to see if I was unconsciously influenced. One of my current loves are the illustrations of Anita Jeram. She makes the sweetest little animals!

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                          JennyJones @TessaW last edited by

                          @tessaw Thanks! I am learning a lot reworking things. I went back to a couple of spots I did a few weeks ago and touched them up too. I know Jake's words "finished, not perfect" and that I have to let them go and move forward. But these were not finished for too long...

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                            JennyJones @Eli last edited by

                            @eli Thank you. You guys are so encouraging. I am feeling empowered to keep it up.

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