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    • braden H
      braden H @Johanna Kim last edited by

      @johanna-kim Thanks 🙂 Clouds are one of my favourite things to render. So floofy...

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        Yet more paint. I really liked the idea of having an object to better show scale, but I wasn't completely sold on the feather (not a bad idea at all, though) so I figured a lone tree and local forest denizen might work.

        Slowly fixing, pushing and pulling from here on out.

        I may remove the chipmunk...

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

          @braden-hallett this is looking amazing!

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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          • LauraA
            LauraA SVS OG last edited by

            Oh my! That thing is huge!!! I'm already scared. Love the economy of the whole thing.

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
            http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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              Kat SVS OG last edited by

              Love this, including the chipmunk!

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              • Dima Eichhorn
                Dima Eichhorn @braden H last edited by

                @braden-hallett I love this !

                https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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                • rotub
                  rotub last edited by

                  It took me a few seconds to see the giant bird's shadow, but once I had I really fell in love with this piece. Really nice concept and great execution. Look forward to seeing the finished artwork

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @rotub last edited by

                    @rotub As long as it gets gotten gradually I'm gleeful 🙂

                    It's almost completely finished at this point. I just need to spend a few hours her and there kinda fiddling if you get what I mean.

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      WELP, I didn't like it, so I restarted.

                      Though my work's often 'okay' and the colours seem to work most of the time, it's always a struggle and it's never quite what I want.

                      So I tried changing my process. Much looser value study, and several colour comps which I then blew up and did linework over.

                      Usually I do a sort of value study with finished lineart and very polished values and it's too easy to get lost in the details.

                      I'll let it sit for a few days and choose which one to finish at that point 🙂

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                      • kaitlinmakes
                        kaitlinmakes @braden H last edited by

                        @braden-hallett
                        You crack me up! I just love you dedication to exploration and learning.
                        I did love your original, but seeing these new ones your foreground elements are so much stronger, especially the character of the dog and boy. Kudos!
                        It's amazing how never ending this whole process can be.

                        https://www.instagram.com/kaitlin.kahn.art
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                        • Erin.Cortese
                          Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

                          @braden-hallett Wow, I was shocked when you said you restarted, but the new one reads much better! I also prefer the colours in the new one.

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey last edited by

                            I like the changed in the clouds, definitely looks better I totally get the need to restart. I’ve had a tough time figuring out the right balance of linework and picking color with my style. Iz not easy lots of pieces and this struggle makes the art way better at the end. Dont forget to trust yourself 🙂

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @kaitlinmakes last edited by

                              @kaitlinmakes said in BIG WIP:

                              It's amazing how never ending this whole process can be.

                              It's always fun when it turns out your 'final' piece is actually the rough draft 🙂 Kind of a lot like writing, actually...

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @aleksey said in BIG WIP:

                                I’ve had a tough time figuring out the right balance of linework and picking color

                                Literally my struggle 🙂 It's getting close to kind of working, I think.

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  Yeah you got it happening mostly already actually. Keeping it simple and minimizing the use of soft edges worked best for me. I ended up using flatter colors and this let my lines do most of the work. Kinda like comic books do.

                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • Justin Moss
                                    Justin Moss last edited by

                                    Great Work! I was gonna suggest moving the lone deer and tree, plus softening the clouds. It's like I didn't even have to suggest it because you had already done it with the new piece.

                                    The new one has a great focal point. My eye is immediately drawn to the shadow of the bird with your use of values. And the rest of the detail supports how massive this creature really is. Like I said great work.

                                    Justin Moss
                                    JMossCreations
                                    https://cara.app/jmosscreations
                                    www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H last edited by

                                      Little changes here and there 🙂

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                                        @braden-hallett noice

                                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                        alekseyillustration.com

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H last edited by

                                          So many little painting touch-ups. Calling it done, though 🙂

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                                          • Erin.Cortese
                                            Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett I love it! You really captured the idea and feeling of "Big"

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