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    • nasvikdraws
      nasvikdraws last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett OMG I love where this is going! Can't wait for the finished piece πŸ™‚

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      • CukiArtist
        CukiArtist last edited by

        This looks so good. My only feedback is I find it a bit odd that the parents are on one side and the children on the other. It takes away from one of your original brain storms of the parents been at the eye of the storm. Unless you are planning it that way for how it would work with text.

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett i love how chaotic this is. I can’t wait to see what you’ll do with it in color. Great job.

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

            UGG this is so good. I was going to say the color scheme of warm and parents cool is the best one, but you already said it. Great work @Braden-Hallett


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            • theprairiefox
              theprairiefox last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett So much fun... so much my house!

              I love the color study with the cool colors on the parents and warm colors everywhere else. I think it really reinforces what you are going for.

              -The Prairie Fox
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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett I like the tension of the red overlay colour -red being the obvious love colour and also angry colour at least for me. So in one way the environment is going off the walls madness but the parents don't let this consume their love for their family -two different points of view wrapped up or should I say exploding at the same time! And the parents are successfully staying cool. πŸ™‚

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                • braden H
                  braden H @CukiArtist last edited by

                  @CukiArtist No text, but in general I like them happily sitting on the right third of the drawing. If i redo the piece (maaaaaaaaaybe?) I'll play with them being a literal eye a storm closer to centre πŸ™‚

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    Hokeedokee!

                    local value:

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                    Rendered value

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                    Basic light map (warms and cools the local colour layer)

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                    Basic local colour layer

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                    And from here I'm gonna paint! Push and pull, saturate and desaturate. Reintroduce more of the light colour. Kinda fiddle with it until I'm happier with it. This process gets me to a point where I have ALMOST all the puzzle pieces. Now I just need to assemble it.

                    I have a really hard time with colour. I feel a little like a tone deaf person who's trying to learn scales solely on where to place my fingers. I'm sure someday something'll just click. Just gonna take yet more friggin' practice.

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett i dig the use of cool colors as a way to focus on the parents

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @braden H last edited by Kevin Longueil

                        @Braden-Hallett This is looking awesome! I did a quick and hopefully not too annoying cut and paste of my thinking - i do still feel like the parents are possibly too far in the background and may be a different scale than the children? Was thinking a window over the sink might really free you up and allow you to do more things with the lighting in the room - but maybe would change the mood too much? - just a thought though πŸ™‚

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                          @Aleksey Thanks! I'm hoping to reinforce that as i paint πŸ™‚

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                            @Kevin-Longueil Oh wow! I really like the window idea. That would really let me cast a different light on the parents. If I go back and repaint (I think I almost always do πŸ˜‚ ) I'll totally do that.

                            As for the scale, I think if I put a shadow under the table and put the mum's feet where they should be it'll reinforce where they are in space. We'll see πŸ™‚

                            Thanks for the paint over :smiling_face_with_open_mouth:

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                            • xin li
                              xin li last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett: -Really lovely concept, and very challenging composition to pull off. So well done. @Kevin-Longueil Love the window idea. It really adds so much to the mood.

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @xin li last edited by

                                @xin-li Thanks! I may, instead of doing a LOT of surgery to add the window, play with some kind of hanging kitchen light. Benefit of the light without having to renovate the kitchen :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

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                                  cbrocke last edited by

                                  This is looking great! I've learned a lot by seeing your process to get to this point!

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                                  • djly
                                    djly @cbrocke last edited by

                                    @cbrocke I agree, really helpful as a newbie!

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                                    • ?
                                      A Former User last edited by

                                      This thread is great, wonderful to see the work in progress and people helping to bring the illustration along.

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H last edited by

                                        Push and pull. Saturate and desaturate. Cool down and warm up.

                                        Next step is flatten linework and paint allllll on one layer.

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                                          mzmolly @braden H last edited by

                                          @Braden-Hallett really terrific concept and line work

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @mzmolly last edited by

                                            @mzmolly Thanks πŸ™‚

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