WIP Book Cover „The Jungle Book“
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Before and after:
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@saciia_ I love the values on this cover. I think the silhouette design is very strong. One thing I don't know if you have considered--every silhouette is equal in importance--You might be fixing to change this with the addition of color, but if you want to create visual heirachy---maybe all the silhouettes are pointing to the boy...? , then something might need to give. If you are striving for harmony, you nailed it.
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I really like this. The bold silhouettes contrast nicely with the background/foreground. I appreciate the balanced composition to this piece as well. Great work!
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Hi @saciia_ Laura said, that all animals are pointing to the boy, what about changing the direction of the wolf, so that it also goes in this direction.
About the hanging, love the new position of the liana and boys lower body, I would make his right hand little bit more straight hanging. I an happy that You didn't changed Bagheera, I liked his pose also. Try to make the authors name bit bigger. -
This is a beautiful composition, I like all the details in it. Second one is a subtle improvement on the first.
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@saciia_ Yeaah this is the stuff! To see what a huge difference one small change can make. Love it!
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This looks great @saciia_ ! I wonder if making the boy smaller might add a bit more interest. If you want to try that I would suggest thickening the tree beside him to keep the visual balance. It looks great as is though. This style really suits the book. Good work!
