WIM Book Cover "The Wind in the Willows"
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I also prefer the middle one and with hard edge.
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@Squirrelsize I like the first two. The last one I find too light ad the characters in the boat to sharp a contrast -I feel it gets lost/messy.
Which now looking at the second one I find the character and boat area similar to my issue with the third one but like it better. -
Wow! Thanks you all! Some really good tips and suggestions
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Left is the old dark one. Right is the new with straight edges.
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@Squirrelsize I like straight edges
Nice work! this is looking great!
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@Squirrelsize The straight edges look nicer to me as the jagged edge is a bit distracting. Good work!
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Added some river rocks! Should I add more?
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I think the composition on the right (with less rocks) is more effective. It leaves a nice amount of negative space for the eye to rest and move a little more freely. For some reason the composition with more rocks diverts my gaze to the top of the hill very quickly. This is really beautiful, I love the colours, and textures.
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@inkandspatter Okay! Cool! I totally see that now. Good advice!
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Your version with less rocks looks like a finished work to me. So nice.
Though maybe the value of the bottom of the background trees is a bit strong? This is really looking amazing. -
@KathrynAdebayo Cool, I'll try lighting up the background trees and see how it looks
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Okay! Working on back now. What you all think? I was thinking about putting in some more elements, but I've been finding this piece likes to be simple. Maybe add a bird or two in the branches?
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@Squirrelsize Beautiful! Your design is very well thought out and very nicely balanced.
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Yey! I'm getting really excited! This has been a fun piece! Still open to changes however. You all see anything that bothers you that I should change up?
These are my edits from the last several post:
I lighted up the background trees on the front cover.
Switch the willow tree on the back to the right side of the page.
Put clothes and a tail on Ratty
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It looks really good!!!
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@MichaelaH Hahaha, Thanks
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Wow, I can't believe how far this piece came. You've really worked hard on this and it shows. Really beautiful work, you should be proud!
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@djly AWE, thanks so much girl!
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This is what my Adobe Illustrator art file looks like right now lol
