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    • Erin.Cortese
      Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

      Here is my Exercise 4. I was drawn to this thumbnail because it is outside what I would usually do...loose and not overly structural. I am finding that I feel more relaxed working on things that are more stylized and less structural, but it still feels strange.

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      • JerrySketchyArt
        JerrySketchyArt last edited by

        Exercise 4

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        • JerrySketchyArt
          JerrySketchyArt @murielle last edited by JerrySketchyArt

          @murielle I was going for a mix of "boring" and "interesting" in those thumbnails. They mention in the class that sometimes you want boring, and since I often need to make background elements that blend in the boring stuff is important for me too.

          I don't disagree on the trees. I probably could have made more of those interesting. I tend to try and make my distinctions on the vertical shapes for those. I think the problem is that trees tend to be pretty evenly distributed (at least horizontally) in real life.

          I went for a walk after reading your comment and took a good look at all of the trees. Noticed that they are amazingly symmetrical in general. Pretty much all of the asymmetrical ones I spotted were forced that way by cutting. I guess being different would be what makes those one's interesting though. πŸ™‚

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          • demotlj
            demotlj SVS OG @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

            @JerrySketchyArt Do you live in a residential area? I think it’s true that trees in a residential area will be more symmetrical whereas in a woods, they are rarely symmetrical because of crowding and wind damage. I took these pictures on a walk down my road lined by State forest. Even the trees in the open have damage from winds. Thinking about this is helpful because the shape of the trees in a drawing then could help signal the setting. 0F507884-FB5A-478E-9311-CF44C47F29D8.jpeg B9F73D75-E46B-4400-9915-3E5F4281135B.jpeg F31101D8-EA3E-4129-B7BB-DCA0BF1BD584.jpeg

            Laurie DeMott
            instagram.com/demotlj

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              Remember ladies and gents that the intention of this course is not necessarily to design things that are real (though that's fine πŸ™‚ ) it's to design things that look good.

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                Also (watching Jake's exaples in the 'reference' video at about 50 minutes) a great way to make sure that you keep the awesome silhouette for your building/tree is to take the black silhouette, resize it (and lower the opacity) then draw overtop of it on a new layer. I've found that if I don't do that I tend to de-exaggerate my silhouette.

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                • Heather Boyd
                  Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

                  1-3 Exercises completed this week. πŸ™‚ Just squeezed in. I loved doing these. But houses were the hardest -master perspective class after this.

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                  Be blessed,

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                    @Heather-Boyd Perspective is haaaaaard! But i do find it easier in thumbnail form πŸ™‚ It's a lot easier to extend those imaginary lines waaaaaaay off the page when what you're drawing is tiny

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett

                      You make it look easy.

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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd These are great! Very creative.

                        Laurie DeMott
                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                        • demotlj
                          demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                          Here is my third silhouette page which I don’t love but it’s done and my objective view of one of my silhouettes. At least, I think it’s the objective view if I’m understanding what that means.

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                          Laurie DeMott
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                          • braden H
                            braden H @demotlj last edited by

                            @demotlj Neat design!

                            Which silhouette were you using for it?

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by demotlj

                              @Braden-Hallett it was my first set of building silhouettes second row farthest right.
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                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @demotlj last edited by

                                @demotlj Oh nice! I missed that page πŸ˜‰ You stayed nice and true to the silhouette!

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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH last edited by

                                  So I think I am finished, not perfect. It was very difficult, because I never do such perspective. It is only one raw sketch, would like to do one clean sketch with better perspective (after it is finished I see many parts lacking..but as Jake said, it is good to go some more times over the design after time passes), but after 2 hours doing this exercise, I need some break. But I am proud of me, that I did some environment and one I never usually do...

                                  SVS CED4 OD V01 Michaela Heimlich.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
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                                  • demotlj
                                    demotlj SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                                    @MichaelaH Very intricate! The different perspective is very nice and well done. That's something I have real problems doing -- turning my creation (or anything) around in space and imagining how it would like from another angle. Yours is great.

                                    Laurie DeMott
                                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                                    • MichaelaH
                                      MichaelaH @demotlj last edited by

                                      @demotlj Thank You. I know what You mean, I also never turn my objects, because I don't know how and am afraid of it. Now I know it takes also a lot of time and work. I think my ship looks longer than it is in frontal sketch, but it is ok for the first try.

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                                      • demotlj
                                        demotlj SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                                        @MichaelaH I've started making clay models of my characters so that I can turn them around but it would be a lot faster and easier if I could just get my brain to do it without aids πŸ™‚

                                        Laurie DeMott
                                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                                        • MichaelaH
                                          MichaelaH @demotlj last edited by

                                          @demotlj That is a great idea, to take objects like models or like you do with the clay.

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                                          • murielle
                                            murielle @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                            @ErinCortese These look so good. Nice job!

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