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    Group run through creative environment design week 2 art and feedback

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Once again, If anyone here wants more critiquey feedback on their work, post it and tag me with an @ and I'll give you a short critique.

      If you want a critique but DON'T wanna post it here for whatever reason feel free to PM me on these forums or DM me on discord 🙂

      I don't feel AS comfortable critiquing these, but I'll do my best!

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator @murielle last edited by

        @murielle Thank you!

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd last edited by

          Week 2 just finished up. Challenging, some were more helpful in visualising than others.

          CEDC Workbook 01-6 FINAL part 1.jpg

          CEDC Workbook 01-5 FINAL VLAUE part2.jpg

          Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
          Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
          Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
          Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

          Be blessed,

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          • Nathalie Kranich
            Nathalie Kranich @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett You do so well on all these exercises __ amazing stuff.

            www.nathaliekranich.com
            https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
            https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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            • Nathalie Kranich
              Nathalie Kranich last edited by

              Very belated week 2 attempt 🙂

              valueStudies1 copy.jpg

              www.nathaliekranich.com
              https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
              https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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              • braden H
                braden H @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                @Nathalie-Kranich Nice work! Looks to me like you nailed it 😃

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                • Erin.Cortese
                  Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                  @Nathalie-Kranich These are great, your values look spot on!

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                    @Nathalie-Kranich Pretty wow wow!

                    Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                    Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                    Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                    Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                    Be blessed,

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                    • Nathalie Kranich
                      Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                      @Heather-Boyd @Erin-Cortese @Braden-Hallett thank you guyys, I swear I spent four times as long trying to find images to copy than I did copying them. How was your process for that, and where did you lot look for masters to study? I just sort of went with 'stuff I like ' but I'm not sure if there's a better educated way of determining what is worth studying 😃

                      www.nathaliekranich.com
                      https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                      https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                      • Erin.Cortese
                        Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                        @Nathalie-Kranich I chose mine based on a variety of things, but they were all compositions that I either liked or had styles I want to experiment with in the future. Many, if not all of the compositions were ones that I already had saved on Instagram, or were taken directly from people I follow. I had so many saved to choose from that I narrowed it down based on wide format and different levels of detail.

                        I learned a lot doing it this way - one of the more detailed ones I did, I absolutely hated doing. It came from an artist who does environments that I thought I would love doing, and now I know I have absolutely no desire to work in that style. I learned things like that from the other thumbnails too.

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by Heather Boyd

                          @Nathalie-Kranich

                          Just my Pinterest boards. Then when I reviewed first collection -there was a colour scheme which was super cool (for myself to see that I naturally combine works by colours/complementary). So I based mine off of colour (unconsciously) and value to help me work through my struggle with that. Composition was sort of in the back of my mind. I work more on how a work makes me feel -atmosphere and mood and such.

                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                          Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                          Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                          Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                          Be blessed,

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                            @Nathalie-Kranich I think we're all in the same boat for picking study material 🙂

                            After a certain point a tried to stop thinking about the images and just take the ones that caught my eye. Pinterest was awesome for source material.

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                            • Nathalie Kranich
                              Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                              Ha, that makes me feel better then, anything we like goes I guess! I browsed Artstation for mine.
                              I also just noticed just how formulaic a lot of the images I picked out appear, in terms of placing a vertical object on the line to the right third, against a bright background, framed by a dark foreground. It applies to all of them, apart from the first, which is just the same formula flipped! I feel like @Heather-Boyd 's second set of choices also have a lot of similarities, with bright midgrounds being framed by quite dark foregrounds on both sides, like a cave.

                              www.nathaliekranich.com
                              https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                              https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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