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    Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback

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    • braden H
      braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @ErinCortese said in Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback:

      @Braden-Hallett the stylization is something that you nailed! Yours look like they are ready to drop in a composition. Is that something that comes naturally for you, or did it come with practice?

      I think it mostly comes with practice. I've done a LOT of comic pages, so style's something that's crept in over time 🙂

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

        The problem with procrastinating is that I look at what everyone else has done and am so blown away I'm reluctant to even try 🙂 (I will give it shot but you guys are really good. I love everyone's stuff.)

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • MichaelaH
          MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

          Done...uff...only raw sketch
          CED_Workbook2-1487653085372-1a.jpg

          https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
          https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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          • MichaelaH
            MichaelaH @demotlj last edited by MichaelaH

            @demotlj I know what You mean, but we shouldn't be discouraged...try your best, we all are learning and learning never stops, we can get only better.

            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

              @MichaelaH horsey! Nice touch

              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • Coley
                Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                @ErinCortese fantastic couches!!

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • Coley
                  Coley @MichaelaH last edited by

                  @MichaelaH sweet little barn and horses! I thought about doing a barn as well but haven't yet 😉

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

                    @MichaelaH i was struggling on what to do with that little cube attached to the house. I never would have thought of a stable! Nice work 🙂

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                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                      You guys make such amazing work. I wish I was a part of this. 🙂

                      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                      • murielle
                        murielle @Coley last edited by

                        @Coley these are really good. I love that you added shading/texture.

                        There is just one thing that isn't clear. On the second one with the stairs. Are these stairs 'floating' (or overlapping)? The wall of the house seems to go in underneath the stairs. If there is indeed a space I would either add some shading, or put an extra support beam underneath the steps.

                        http://artbymurielle.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                        • Erin.Cortese
                          Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @nyrrylcadiz We are only on week two, and everyone is working at different paces. You should join!

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @nyrrylcadiz joooooooooin uuuuuuuuuuus 🙂

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Okeedokee ladies and gents, I may not be as present in the forums the next 6 days or so since I'm going to a comicon and not bringing a computer.

                              So next week's homework may be posted Monday night instead of Sunday night. But worry not! This group run through will keep going until we're all done.

                              Mostly because I wanna do another one after this one 😃

                              So many awesome houses and couches this week 🙂

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                              • murielle
                                murielle @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett Enjoy

                                http://artbymurielle.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                • murielle
                                  murielle last edited by

                                  Okay, so here is my entry for the first exercise. I did them on paper, drawing nicely on a tablet is to difficult for me.

                                  6a.jpg

                                  http://artbymurielle.com
                                  https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                  • Coley
                                    Coley @murielle last edited by

                                    @murielle yes, I realized afterwards that there was an issue, the stairs start at a level even with the smaller part of the house but then are flush with the front part of the bigger part of the house lol. I didnt change it but maybe next go round I will try similar. thanks for pointing it out 🙂

                                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                    • Erin.Cortese
                                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @murielle last edited by

                                      @murielle Really nice, and on paper too..impressive! I really like your wood texture. The smaller hut in the bottom image is adorable, I love what you did with the roof.

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett lol 😄 thank you so much but my schedule is jam-packed with school. I’ll probably try to catch up with you guys in a couple of months. Thanks though.

                                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                        • demotlj
                                          demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                                          Here is my first one. I know we weren't supposed to get detailed but I am also trying to learn pen and ink so in the interest of time, I used this exercise for both design and pen work. I hope the teacher won't take off too many points for ignoring the rules of the assignment 🙂

                                          I'd be interested in critiques, particularly regarding the inking. (One thing I learned is that it's hard to work small when inking -- this is 5x7 and the front is darker than I intended because I couldn't get the lines any finer.)

                                          IMG_6082.JPG

                                          Laurie DeMott
                                          instagram.com/demotlj

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                                          • Heather Boyd
                                            Heather Boyd @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                            @ErinCortese I think there cute and quaint 🙂

                                            Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
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                                            Be blessed,

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