Post Video Critique Re-do

[suenaumi]

I'm very grateful for the advice from @Lee-White and thought I'd share my attempts at addressing some of the issues he mentioned:

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AFTER

[KathrynAdebayo]

I like how you’ve smoothed the tree and darkened the area around the salamander. Beautiful!

[suenaumi]

Thank you!

[DarleneAnico]

I really like the texture in this piece. I can't stop looking at the squirrel's tail lol. I like how you darkened the tail and the salamander, the piece reads much better because of it. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth: And smoothing out the tree really gets the squirrel to pop out more

[suenaumi]

@DarleneAnico Thank you. I appreciate your comment