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    Portfolio piece- Anthropomorphic Animals- WIP

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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

      @nyrrylcadiz This is looking SO good!

      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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      • K
        Kat SVS OG last edited by

        Such a fun piece with a great story! My only input is to look for tangents because they can be a distraction. For example, when I follow the ducks wings, I'm led to the cow's elbow almost touching, and then the tree limbs, which I'm sort of getting lost in.

        I love the bright and colorful mood you've got here! Great work.

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

          fabulous!

          Lisa Rush
          www.lisarushgallery.com
          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

            Hi, everyone! I’ve been working on the piece. I really felt that my values felt weak with my illustration so I went ahead and experimented with various lighting as seen below. I tried a late afternoon scene as well as an evening scene. However, none of them sit well with my idea for the piece. I wanted this work to feeling light and joyous but the other lighting were not really sending out that message in my opinion. The afternoon one seemed a tad bit too dramatic than I’d prefer while the evening scene just seemed like a different story all together. Especially that third piece below. It made the scene look like it was a dance party or something. I love the colors tho. I might use it in the future.

            Aside from the rivalry of the 2 dancers up front, I created this in order to showcase this folkdance from my country. And with the other lighting, it just made the piece inauthentic. Based on my experience, this dance was performed during day time and everyone had fun watching it. It was just an overall happy feeling. With the other lighting, it just felt like a total departure from that memory. That is why I chose to settle with my initial lighting. It just plainly showed how I wanted the piece to feel.

            I added a low-opacity, white layer on the background characters and then a color dodge layer on the main characters. I remember Will Terry mentioned that in order to increase focus on an object, it must have a high contrast in relation to its suroundings or be in red. Hopefully those vibrant reds are enough to make the characters pop. I also spruced up the chicken girl’s dress. I didn’t want to go overboard with the accessories since I want the piece to be as faithful to the real thing as possible though my take on it is fairly romanticized. ( dancers of Itik-itik wear very simple costumes).

            So, yeah, here’s my piece. I’ll still have to tweak a few details but it’s almost done.

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            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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            • ?
              A Former User last edited by

              This is such a lovely piece and it's been great to see your process, you're so good at lighting scenes 😮 🙂
              I personally like the nighttime one with the spotlights, it really helps to make the two main characters stand out - maybe you could make the spotlight on the couple at the back just slightly lower opacity so that we can really focus on the main characters. Apart from that I think it's such a great piece! 🙂

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              • Coreyartus
                Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                These are all gorgeous! So nicely done--thank-you so much for sharing your development and your choices. It's really quite helpful to see these! Lovely!

                Children's Illustration Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusillustration.com
                Art Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusimagery.com
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                Pixelfed: https://pixelfed.social/Coreyartus

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