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    Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

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    • AndyIllo
      AndyIllo last edited by

      Amazing progress Soorya!

      Was unsure what exactly you were stuck on, but I think both versions look great (as well as both your colour studies a few posts up!) The more red coloured one has a warmer look whereas the blue feels a bit more like 'middle of the night' - am not sure if that helps but there you go

      Also, the scene in the woods by the fire, I think your latest sketch looks good, foreground and all. It may be worth giving the foreground trees some slight texture so they don't look so blocky, but I wouldn't worry about there being 'not much going on' unless it's missing any story elements!

      Website: www.andycarterillustration.com
      https://www.instagram.com/andycartr/

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      • MichaelaH
        MichaelaH @animatosoor last edited by

        @animatosoor It looks so peaceful and night time---I love it, you are so good with dark values and shadows, I am fully afraid of these things and background...so I am happy to learn from You also

        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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        • animatosoor
          animatosoor @AndyIllo last edited by

          I appreciate it, @AndyIllo. πŸ™‚

          Oops, yes, I didn't even mention what I was stuck on, haha. It was definitely the colour scheme that I was struggling with. I had already narrowed my options down to "cool reds/purples," so I think I sort of complicated matters for myself by rendering the whole thing in that warmer pink palette in the earlier picture. I think I have to take a break from night-time scenes for a while after this series, and explore all sorts of brightly lit situations. XD

          Thanks for the note on the scene by the campfire. I will be revisiting that. As for the story: I wanted the keywords to be "awe," "weird," and "warm," and the picture has the two major elements I needed to include. I'm kind of nervous about painting it, haha.

          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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          • animatosoor
            animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

            @MichaelaH I appreciate that you think so, especially since I'm still learning those things. We can learn from each other to improve on our weak spots. 🌻

            https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

              You have such amazing pieces. I enjoyed it very mich scrolling down your posts. They’re all amazing!

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • AndyIllo
                AndyIllo @animatosoor last edited by

                @animatosoor haha no problem, in that case I think you're bang on with your latest version - great work πŸ™‚ Well all your practice has definitely paid off anyway because your night time scenes are ace !

                Website: www.andycarterillustration.com
                https://www.instagram.com/andycartr/

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                • animatosoor
                  animatosoor @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                  @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you so much. That means a lot! 🌻 ☺

                  https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                  • animatosoor
                    animatosoor @AndyIllo last edited by

                    @AndyIllo I'm glad that the colour scheme is working! I'm going to go with that and bring the piece to a finish. Thank you so much once again, hehe.

                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                    • animatosoor
                      animatosoor last edited by

                      Progress shot. I think I'm finally quite happy with the lighting. I know the blue is a bit bright, but I'm hoping the purples surrounding it are helping to counter it?

                      bed7.jpg

                      https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH last edited by

                        You know I like his blue, like with the sandman, would always chose the strong color πŸ™‚ I like it. Does the ghost girl illuminate light? If yes, than I will make the light blue highlights stronger around her and what about dping some blue lines on the surroundings? Or is the blue without reflexion?

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

                          @MichaelaH Hahah yes, I know you like the blue! ❀

                          Yes, my ghost is supposed to emanate some light, but so are the magical items forming the bed. I’ll experiment with adding some blue to the surrounding objects in the room. That could be quite interesting.

                          Thanks for your input!

                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • animatosoor
                            animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                            It's Monday! Final:

                            bed8.jpg

                            I added some blue to the surrounding objects, but it might be very little? I'd love to hear feedback on anything that could be improved upon. And thank you to everyone who's been so generous with their help! πŸ™

                            https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                            • MichaelaH
                              MichaelaH @animatosoor last edited by

                              @animatosoor Hi hi it is great piece, I for me, like the stronger blue from before more...:smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

                              https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                              • animatosoor
                                animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

                                @MichaelaH Hahah that's an easy fix! :face_savouring_delicious_food: I'll put up two versions side-by-side later today.

                                https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH @animatosoor last edited by

                                  @animatosoor But You know, maybe I am the only one...πŸ˜„

                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                  • animatosoor
                                    animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

                                    @MichaelaH XD Here are the two versions side by side.:(The only difference is the blue.) Thank you for all your feedback!

                                    bed8.jpg

                                    bed8_altblue.jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                    • animatosoor
                                      animatosoor last edited by

                                      Week 6:

                                      I've been reworking this sketch based off of the feedback I've already received. This is where it stands now. I'll be finishing this painting this week. πŸ™‚

                                      fire2.jpg

                                      https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                      • ThisKateCreates
                                        ThisKateCreates last edited by

                                        I've only been looking in occasionally, but this finishing drill your doing is producing some beautiful results @animatosoor . Thanks for sharing. I may have to try the #100illustratedtexts

                                        https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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                                        • animatosoor
                                          animatosoor @ThisKateCreates last edited by

                                          @ThisKateCreates Thank you for the kind words! Unfortunately, for years I'd just kept telling myself I can't bring any of my work to a finish, and I was just too afraid (of what exactly, is up for debate. XD)

                                          I'd love for you or for anyone else to join in!

                                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                          • ThisKateCreates
                                            ThisKateCreates @animatosoor last edited by

                                            @animatosoor I have been focusing on that the last month, though not so many down as I see here.
                                            I was calling this finished:
                                            d4b1cf62-7ff4-4142-9a1e-039230145017-image.png
                                            but after showing it for critique I may go back in and sharpen a few things.

                                            https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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