Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

animatosoor

@MichaelaH It's completely fine - I really appreciate the paint-over! Thank you so much. I'm going to try out retaining the shoulder and back from #1 and the fingers from #2. I completely forgot I'd left the face in in the above post. XD

animatosoor

Trying this, where I'm going easy on the foreground.:

MichaelaH

I think I liked it with the tree better, there was this feeling of taking a secret peek at them through the bushes. Will You do the face of the fire spirit? I like it without, because it let me think about what the spirit looks like...hi hi hi

animatosoor

Thank you, @MichaelaH! I can't decide whether I should have the trees left in or not, but have saved two different versions and like them both for the different reasons you've stated. XD It's Monday here and in the spirit of "Finished, not Perfect," I'm going to post my two versions. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

I like the fire without the face, and left it in accidentally in that other post. There is no face in the final. Because these are all potentially going to be portfolio pieces, I'm more than willing to continue fixing them as and when I think of things to improve on.

Final(s):

ThisKateCreates

Finished another flower lady last week. Still working on the next one.

animatosoor

@ThisKateCreates I'm really liking these Flower Ladies!

animatosoor

Week 7:

I'm working out solutions for this idea I have. It is going to be a series of 3 illustrations inspired by a short story I love called The Shadow. I think it's not going to be great for children story-wise, but I'm really excited about illustrating this anyhow. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

Exploratory sketches:

@animatosoor I'm liking the shapes of the figures you're creating! Best of luck with this project!

animatosoor

Thank you, @Alicja-W!

ThisKateCreates

@animatosoor The face is really cutely drawn. Look forward to seeing it in more detail.

animatosoor

Thank you, @ThisKateCreates!

This is my progress so far on The Shadow. There are a number of things I'm still trying to work out at this stage: the design of the shadow, both the characters' poses and expressions, and the overall composition. In my thumbnails I've pretty much narrowed my options for composition down to what I have here, but there's still more problem-solving for me to do.

Any feedback would be more than welcome!

I've also got to get started on the July SVS prompt, haha.

MichaelaH

This looks great, the shadow...huhu hu u
Looking forward to your july promt idea...

Nathalie Kranich

I am very excited to see where this is going, might need to dig out that short story! Oooooooh.

animatosoor

@MichaelaH Thank you, Michaela. I shall share it once I've gotten my thumbnails together, hehe.

animatosoor

@Nathalie-Kranich You'd love it, I think, since we both love some of the creepier material out there! This one's weird, so it's perfect. XD I've this inner conflict on how much of it I should really let show in my work, lol.

Nathalie Kranich

Yes, me too, as you know! All depends on your market I guess! Who's the author?

animatosoor

@Nathalie-Kranich Yes, I know! It's okay, we'll figure our inner conflicts out.

Hans Christian Andersen!

animatosoor

Inching along with the posing and linework!:

I'm wondering if viewers can tell that both characters are the same person? I'm trying to work on it so they still look like each other, despite their clothing and expressions being very different.

I also tried to ensure the door doesn't cut right through the middle of the picture, but it's still there. :S

MichaelaH

@animatosoor Hmm I didn't knwo they were the same person, the hands should be longer on the original and the eyes differ to much, but hair and style is ok. I would put the knie from the shadow guy little down and the shadows parts on the floor thinner. Maybe the beard on the ear side that it is the same for moth in angle (going up)

animatosoor

Thank you, @MichaelaH! I'll go work on those things. Revised sketch for now.: